go full on naughty ):3 its not like people won't love it

Translation is very fluent, great work hf ^^

Thanks :3

I say, you do what you're comfortable with. It is your comic. I always thought your comic interesting as is

It's Ripli's comic, I'm just a translator. (and all this is translated comic)

Whoops, I misread that. My apologies. I'd say stick to your current guns as it where, your translations are fluent, smooth. Not an easy task

He is bi and now making moves on Jonty? Probably want's to get into a three way I bet. But then what even would be Jonty's orientation?

Seeing the comment. So the original is more vulgar? I do kind of wonder what that is, I gotta know. But I do kind of like how this one sounds witty, and Jonty seems that he is a bit too innocent to catch on what he is talking about. That makes this cute.

Clem dumped him, and now he wants to take Jonty.

No, the original is more restrained, and the translation is more vulgar.

Yes, Jonty didn't even understand what Stephen wanted, and why he and Cleem had got into it.

Oh. So he just wants to take Jonty just to hurt her.

Okay, I got it backwards then. Well did Ripli imply that's what he was getting at? If that is the case, I think its fine the way you did it.

That makes him so darn adorable. He still has not gotten to that drink yet I wait so long for that reaction.

it actually is a very bad roast from her. she tries to burn him that he sucks cock, but says that she doesn't. Which is sad. It means she wont do it to Jonty :(

Stephen would have something to laugh at Jonty for, so its all reverse.

I think it depends on how you look at it.

i dont think theres much wiggle room. she says she doesnt. so she doesnt. not a good roast that way.

Even though she probably will suck on other things rather quickly :D

I mean see it as bad or not.

I don't think most people are going to be able to read both the original and the translated, so as long as it fits both the story and the characters, no one will know.

thats the idea, make it feel the same for both languages

hmmmmm

I'd say that this is perfect dialog, it fits the characters and pokes at their established history with eachother. If anything, you are doing a perfect job of translating these. :)

I'm very split in how you should translate... In whatever way works best for you?

Id stay original and mainly cause whatever ripli posted next probably, certain panel scenes wouldn't work if you went vulgar. So yeah stay original cause this comic is interesting enough as it is

being myself a translator of a furry comic to make a French version, I make sure that the dialogues stick to the originals or respect their meaning, but seeing as the original author left you the choice, I would say more vulgar . ^^ I do not know why, but I would not like to be in his place ^^

I like the translation as you have it now since it is already a great translation.

I have to say that added vulgarity does make it more enjoyable for me. If it can be made more vulgar without compromising the plot, then I say go for it.

Well, Stephen really didnt joke with the drunky part o.O, that's prob the most creepy face i have seen from Clem (second panel)

Go with whatever you see fit, I am sure its gonna be good either way.

Jonty's not the only one who's shocked by that little statement by Clem...or it could just be the drink talking

Personally i'd like it as the original, but you do what you want. You're the translator after all :P
Either way it'll be good ^_^

being strictly English speaking here and helping in the editing process I don't see it as too vulgar, it's more of a jest from a drunk vampire on Stephens sexuality rather than an insinuation of anything to come.

and hfd4, fantastic job on this scene's translation, you didn't even need me for this one. you don't give yourself enough credit, you're a fantastic translator.

*chokes on drink*

Oh did that just slip out of her mouth??

As a native English speaker I agree with Treble_Wulph: your translation as it stands is absolutely fine. For me it hits just the right level of innuendo.

Thank you for all your work on translating ripli's strip and bringing it to a wider audience. It is very much appreciated.