a redline of her (viewers) left hand would be much much appreciated, as would critiques
sometimes, i feel like i don't really know what the hell to do with eura's design.
sometimes, i feel like i don't really know what the hell to do with eura's design.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Canine (Other)
Size 373 x 568px
File Size 171 kB
i like the design.
the prob with the left hand is, that you drew it from a frontal view, while it should be from above.
check this picture http://lara-enterprises.com/images/.....chalid/001.jpg
you can see here both views of the fingers. you did it like his right hand, it should be like the right ^^
i hate to draw hands too xD
you should maybe try to make the piercing more round, looks a bit like a texture then an object :/
the other hand i well made and i like the expression ^^
i can almost "see" her sigh xD
even with this "hand-issue" its very nice done =D
the prob with the left hand is, that you drew it from a frontal view, while it should be from above.
check this picture http://lara-enterprises.com/images/.....chalid/001.jpg
you can see here both views of the fingers. you did it like his right hand, it should be like the right ^^
i hate to draw hands too xD
you should maybe try to make the piercing more round, looks a bit like a texture then an object :/
the other hand i well made and i like the expression ^^
i can almost "see" her sigh xD
even with this "hand-issue" its very nice done =D
I'm not much of a critic, but besides the things that Tharmorteos pointed out, her right ear (left from a viewer's perspective), seems a bit off to me. Looks like it is kinda low compared to her other ear. Maybe it's the angle, or the hair, I dunno. XD
Besides that, it looks beautiful. Love the eyes and the expression she's got there. I'm always pleasantly surprised by the amount of emotion you convey through your artwork.
Besides that, it looks beautiful. Love the eyes and the expression she's got there. I'm always pleasantly surprised by the amount of emotion you convey through your artwork.
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i.....ritredline.jpg
I suck at redlines, hehe, but i hope this helps. The hand did give me some trouble too so I tried the smaller doodle. Basically make sure you can see the top of the hand. :3
I suck at redlines, hehe, but i hope this helps. The hand did give me some trouble too so I tried the smaller doodle. Basically make sure you can see the top of the hand. :3
To say the least, the right hand needs to show a bit more of the back of her hand/the palm part. And how the fingers blend to the arm is a little wrong. Look at your hand and note that the palm is wider than your wrist.
Left arm is alright enough to me. Though the absence of the thumb is disconcerting, I just realized it could look like that. Though perhaps a little bump at where the thumb and palm would meet could dispel that illusion.
Quoting Kayote, there should at least be a glimpse of the neck, even if it's at the base of her head.
And from me, the eyes look off, the right one. Unless... If I'm not mistaken, the left eye is slightly squinted from the hand being near it, as in the cheek is pushed up, and thus the right eye is actually normal.
Sans all that, I like the picture. Pretty, and it explains my daily predicament :P
Left arm is alright enough to me. Though the absence of the thumb is disconcerting, I just realized it could look like that. Though perhaps a little bump at where the thumb and palm would meet could dispel that illusion.
Quoting Kayote, there should at least be a glimpse of the neck, even if it's at the base of her head.
And from me, the eyes look off, the right one. Unless... If I'm not mistaken, the left eye is slightly squinted from the hand being near it, as in the cheek is pushed up, and thus the right eye is actually normal.
Sans all that, I like the picture. Pretty, and it explains my daily predicament :P
i love Euras design, only change it if you want to.
and the left hand looks right to me. maybe a few changes could be made. what i enjoy doing is maybe taking a picture and trying to look off of that.
i think the hand on the left( her right hand) looks a little off though.. but i could be wrong.
but seriously i like this. and i'm sure alot of others do aswell.
and the left hand looks right to me. maybe a few changes could be made. what i enjoy doing is maybe taking a picture and trying to look off of that.
i think the hand on the left( her right hand) looks a little off though.. but i could be wrong.
but seriously i like this. and i'm sure alot of others do aswell.
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