This looks really cool. :)

One quibble: shouldn't that be "Jenna's and my troubles"?

Not sure. I tried to make it more formal english as Whisper talks quite formally but if someone can cite me the rule, I'll change it.

Well, so many people have it drilled in to their heads that the proper grammar is "Person and I" that interesting errors crop up. The trick to knowing which to use is to drop "Person and".

"Eric and I went to the store" (Drop "Eric and") "I went to the store"

This is correct.


"The car soaked Jane and I to the skin" (Drop "Jane and") "The car soaked I to the skin"

That really does sound weird, doesn't it? Therefore, if it's "The car soaked me to the skin", then "The car soaked Jane and me to the skin".

"Jenna and I's troubles had only just begun (Drop "Jenna and") "I's troubles had only just begun."

Doesn't really work, does it? Therefore, I think the best grammar would be "Jenna's and my troubles had only just begun."

That makes a lot of sense though it still comes out strange. I think I will follow Theo's idea and change it to "our troubles had just begun" or something like that.

Thanks for the help. I do really appreciate it.

fixed it with "our". Seemed the simplest solution to me.

Ah, yes, the KISS method: "Keep It Simple, Sir." Sound advice when dealing with the world's weirdest language.

From the rule for the singular, "My troubles..." It's still an awkward sentence though, so I'll offer two alternatives. "Our troubles..." or "The troubles of Jenna and me..."

I was thinking the exact same thing before I saw your comment. To hell with this rule weirdness, I'll just eliminate the need to follow that rule. Much simpler! Thanks!

SUPER DUPER!!!

Tragic it is.

But sometimes Whysper. You gotta do what you gotta do to stop the evil.

She's experienced enough to know that sometimes a price must be paid for the greater good.

That's the truth.

Well, it will not be an indefinitely continueing comic like Zodiac. Once the story is done, so is this comic. We may see Whisper and Jenna again somewhere else though. Depends if the customer keeps paying for it.

*thumbs up* Really digging this series! Can't wait for next months!

thanks dude!

It's never that easy is it? Whisper's definitely a lot more patient and stable then I am though. So now they need to find someone who can exorcise the poor girl?

She's not currently possessed, but Specter is out there and searching for her desperately with her science and army of dino-monsters.

One little nitpick, it should read something like "For Jenna and myself, our troubles had only just begun."

Thanks for the clarification though.

Yeah, we've already had kind of an English debate on how that should read. Decided to change it to "our troubles had only just begun."

Missed that... my mistake

As much as I know you want to return to your usual writing format, I rather enjoyed how you executed the format necessary for this flashback! :>

You're VERY good with comic dialect! You keep things simple with JUST enough emotion to instill the required feeling into the reader, yet it's STILL an exhilarating read! \(^o^)/

thanks very much for the compliment!

I take it the fire was just limited to Jenna's pod? I'm guessing she woud not leave the other captives behind if it meant their lives as well.

honestly, the other captives have been fitted with permanent mind control devices. While I'm sure that Whisper would try to save them if possible, I don't think it was possible for her to try and save them in this instance. Trying to free them would have only caused them to attack her.

Another great entry in the saga, Egg!

Nice job with the flashback!

thanks!