I hope we're all feeling suitably spoopy/spooky; I stuck to my guns and have actually finished a story on time for once Yes, I'm serious xD!).
This Two-Chapter Halloween short-story began life as a scrapped car-chase scene from 'A Fish out of Water'; Tom and Nathan return for this, except in what might seem like an odd move, they're *human* characters. The reason? Simple; I realised about halfway through writing this that a certain plot point simply couldn't work if they were anthropomorphic animals. This story takes place as if 'A Fish out of Water' never happened, but Nathan's backstory in this is exactly the same as it was in that one. I've gone with a 3rd-Person narrative, because sod 1st-Person xD! Chapter 1 really isn't all that scary at all, save for one or two visual images, hence why it'll get a 'General' rating. Chapter 2 is where the spoopyness, or rather the tenseness (as this story is primarily a thriller) really kicks up a gear, and no, that's not a figure of speech :)
This Two-Chapter Halloween short-story began life as a scrapped car-chase scene from 'A Fish out of Water'; Tom and Nathan return for this, except in what might seem like an odd move, they're *human* characters. The reason? Simple; I realised about halfway through writing this that a certain plot point simply couldn't work if they were anthropomorphic animals. This story takes place as if 'A Fish out of Water' never happened, but Nathan's backstory in this is exactly the same as it was in that one. I've gone with a 3rd-Person narrative, because sod 1st-Person xD! Chapter 1 really isn't all that scary at all, save for one or two visual images, hence why it'll get a 'General' rating. Chapter 2 is where the spoopyness, or rather the tenseness (as this story is primarily a thriller) really kicks up a gear, and no, that's not a figure of speech :)
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