I'm almost afraid to ask the meaning/inspiration behind this. > 3>

But yeah, it was really well done. c:

suck!? suck!? SUCK!?
this you would say sucks!? I could show this to my friend Roca who is into so many forms of poetry and he would, himself, call this pure genius! I'm amazed at the fluent verses. The fact that you know a higher vernacular than most of the so called poets on this site just adds to your words and rhyme, the feel of it all. I can feel a bit of pain and misunderstood feelings held up tight in this, whether its from you're own thought process or you channeling the inner turmoil of another it shows you have skill in this type of medium.

it spoke to me, and i kind of wish they were my words. its a powerful poem. be proud of it.

Well considering this was written in about 15 minutes after I haven't written poetry in 4 years, I assumed it would suck xD

15 minutes? must I smack you with a white glittery glove sewn in a small town in chili!? =x
if this was just 15 minutes then you mock me good sir =x

15 to 20, just about.

This is very well written and it reads just lovely.