The Travels of Icarus-Ch.1 Fitting In by lcarus -- Fur Affinity [dot] net

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The Travels of Icarus-Ch.1 Fitting In

By lcarus,
posted 19 years ago Digital Artist

This is my first story subsmition! ^_^
I hope it pleases my audience.
Have fun reading.
more to come.

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Pyro-dragon ~pyro-dragon

Anthro Artist

19 years ago

You may have to spell check and gramma check it a little but other than that this seems good so far.

lcarus ~lcarus

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19 years ago

ok, thanks for feed back and critique ^_^

TShaw ~tshaw

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19 years ago

Yeah, a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing practice and a good spell check won't fix. Nice start to the story so far. Always good to see new talent come forward.

Silverdragon00 ~silverdragon00

Crafter

19 years ago

can't wait to see this story continue on, really good so far! :)

Biffiea ~biffiea

Writer

19 years ago

This looks like its going to be a great story. Nicely written. See if you can't fix the ? problem, it makes it difficult to read. Can't wait to see more of your writing!

lcarus ~lcarus

Digital Artist

19 years ago

yeah...I have no idea what causes that...I'll do my best to fix it.

SevenFisher ~sevenfisher

Watcher

19 years ago

Try put the file so we can download it and read it on computer, it'll fix ? problem.

But other than that, I really enjoyed reading it. ^_^ With little grammar/spelling check and proofreading, it'll improve. But it's good enough. =)

Chaosweaver ~chaosweaver

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19 years ago

Very good ,I like the whole part with the bug simile, but Pittsbugh, with an h, is where I live. The one in Kansas has no h I believe.

I'm getting the vibe he's gona be the only dragon there?

lcarus ~lcarus

Digital Artist

19 years ago

heheh...
you ppl have noooooo idea...
*snickers*

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