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Friendly Warning
This short story might contain spoilers for the game: Angels With Scaly Wings
If you haven't played the game and do not want anything ruined for you, just in case, then you might want to wait until doing so.
Same deal as before and always; if you've made it this far, you probably know what's to expect (spoiler-wise). Other than that, sleep's finally corrected and the weather's been decent around here. Yet, I still have the damn AC in because it's still going to be about 20-freaking-C this week. Seriously, it's October, weather. Get your fish together and ditch summer already.
Otherwise, feel free to jump into this one.
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I actually thought this act felt a little short while writing it, and it kinda is a little bit on the low side (24-26 pages). There's no sex in this one, might not be any for the next either but I'm unsure. If something comes up, I'll put it in. But this act was supposed to be more of a story based one, kinda like Act 7 was. I won't say much about it in case of spoilers, but I hope you enjoy a little more of a dramatic tone. Many questions will soon be answered.
That does remind me, feel free to ask them yourself. As in, if you were going to interrogate the wyrmling, what would your questions be based on the events/evidence you've taken in? I ask, because I'm so used to knowing the answers by now that I'm just curious if you guys have any specific ones. I'll likely put them in if they fit (in other words, if they're not silly ones. Like "What color is your toothbrush?"). Just trying to get some audience participation in this series
Angels With Scaly Wings © M. B. Saunders (of Radical Phi)
Somewhere Out There © Our Lady Peace
All You Wanted © Michelle Branch -does anyone even remember Michelle Branch? Fish I feel old...
Friendly Warning
This short story might contain spoilers for the game: Angels With Scaly Wings
If you haven't played the game and do not want anything ruined for you, just in case, then you might want to wait until doing so.
Same deal as before and always; if you've made it this far, you probably know what's to expect (spoiler-wise). Other than that, sleep's finally corrected and the weather's been decent around here. Yet, I still have the damn AC in because it's still going to be about 20-freaking-C this week. Seriously, it's October, weather. Get your fish together and ditch summer already.
Otherwise, feel free to jump into this one.
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I actually thought this act felt a little short while writing it, and it kinda is a little bit on the low side (24-26 pages). There's no sex in this one, might not be any for the next either but I'm unsure. If something comes up, I'll put it in. But this act was supposed to be more of a story based one, kinda like Act 7 was. I won't say much about it in case of spoilers, but I hope you enjoy a little more of a dramatic tone. Many questions will soon be answered.
That does remind me, feel free to ask them yourself. As in, if you were going to interrogate the wyrmling, what would your questions be based on the events/evidence you've taken in? I ask, because I'm so used to knowing the answers by now that I'm just curious if you guys have any specific ones. I'll likely put them in if they fit (in other words, if they're not silly ones. Like "What color is your toothbrush?"). Just trying to get some audience participation in this series
Angels With Scaly Wings © M. B. Saunders (of Radical Phi)
Somewhere Out There © Our Lady Peace
All You Wanted © Michelle Branch -does anyone even remember Michelle Branch? Fish I feel old...
Category Story / Fanart
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 120 x 68px
File Size 58.8 kB
Listed in Folders
You were far from the only one who mistook the end of act 12. I was trying to keep it a little vague/opened ended without stopping at a cliffhanger, but apparently I left it too vague. Nearly everybody asked whether or not Maverick died at the end, though it has given the series a bit more attention, I do feel bad for deceiving you guys. I'll try to keep it more clear from now on, without being completely blunt (or maybe being blunt would be a better choice? Hmm...)
However, you are the first one to mention about act 11, and I can completely see your perspective. Let alone the lines that might have suggested it. What I was trying to get across for that part was that Bryce sent Maverick home early to be the furball's bodyguard until the case closed. This is one reason why having an editor/another pair of eyes would be nice to have, because I skipped across both of these when I re-read through them. Let alone, didn't consist of any spelling/grammar 'errors', so Microsoft Word wouldn't pick up on that either.
Still, thanks for the feedback, and I'll work on wrapping these endings up better. I hope this one wasn't so bad
However, you are the first one to mention about act 11, and I can completely see your perspective. Let alone the lines that might have suggested it. What I was trying to get across for that part was that Bryce sent Maverick home early to be the furball's bodyguard until the case closed. This is one reason why having an editor/another pair of eyes would be nice to have, because I skipped across both of these when I re-read through them. Let alone, didn't consist of any spelling/grammar 'errors', so Microsoft Word wouldn't pick up on that either.
Still, thanks for the feedback, and I'll work on wrapping these endings up better. I hope this one wasn't so bad
First of all: I'd like to read your interrogation script if it's posible.
Secondly: will there be answers to the questions about the wyrmling in the next Part(s)?
And last: Will there be a trial or somthing to know what will happen to the wyrmling?
I'm liking the more serious note on the Act and the sex scene's are more of an extra vor me. Also, what is Harraks real name then?
Secondly: will there be answers to the questions about the wyrmling in the next Part(s)?
And last: Will there be a trial or somthing to know what will happen to the wyrmling?
I'm liking the more serious note on the Act and the sex scene's are more of an extra vor me. Also, what is Harraks real name then?
I just barely started the next act today, but when I get the interrogation scenes complete, I can send them to you. I was more just curious about any questions you guys might have so far about him. And while we're somewhat on the subject; his real name was planning to be answered. Though there is a bit of a twist to this interrogation as a whole.
Just to be clear: yes. These questions are going to be answered in act 14, which kinda like a 'Season 2 Finale'. There will be a season 3 if I can get a few things straight, though it might take a bit to get there. I want to get something else done before December hits, but I'm still planning to work on SOT.
As for the Trial thing, it was kind of hinted at towards the end. The interrogations themselves are going to be more of a determination of whether or not Harrak should even have one. It's doubtful that I will be writing the trial itself out, like I 'Somewhat' did with Anna's, but the outcome of all this will likely determine the wyrmling's fate in the series.
Still, thanks for the interest Spectra As well as the favorite! The serious style is a little more easier to write, whereas it's what I'm more used to. I feel like I can do it at almost any time, vs needing to be in the mood for erotica. I'm not ditching the adultery entirely, but it will likely become more rare. Regardless, your positive feedback helps tremendously, I can't express that enough
Just to be clear: yes. These questions are going to be answered in act 14, which kinda like a 'Season 2 Finale'. There will be a season 3 if I can get a few things straight, though it might take a bit to get there. I want to get something else done before December hits, but I'm still planning to work on SOT.
As for the Trial thing, it was kind of hinted at towards the end. The interrogations themselves are going to be more of a determination of whether or not Harrak should even have one. It's doubtful that I will be writing the trial itself out, like I 'Somewhat' did with Anna's, but the outcome of all this will likely determine the wyrmling's fate in the series.
Still, thanks for the interest Spectra As well as the favorite! The serious style is a little more easier to write, whereas it's what I'm more used to. I feel like I can do it at almost any time, vs needing to be in the mood for erotica. I'm not ditching the adultery entirely, but it will likely become more rare. Regardless, your positive feedback helps tremendously, I can't express that enough
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