Happy now?
I expect more constructive criticism in the future.
I expect more constructive criticism in the future.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Raccoon
Size 1280 x 1098px
File Size 111.4 kB
DAAAMMN what the heck got everyone out of the woodwork back in the last thread?
Other than the stuff about anotomy and cliched costuming, neither of which i could really personally care about since Cliche never neccesarily meant bad and anatomy (while VERY important to learn) doesnt matter it if you can atleast make it feel like all the pieces go together, i would just like to point out the things that stick out for me. The front arm and the tail.
The arm looks okay untill the elbow joint. then it looks like it goes on longer than the rest, which is funky. try to make shoulder to elbow area and the elbow to hand area the same length. and as psychweasal said taper the tail when its close to the body.
P.S back in 2004 i got this, Learn how to draw manga: male characters book and the anotomy pics and hints in there are awesome. Keep an eye out for the series cuz a lot of the books are really cool.
Other than the stuff about anotomy and cliched costuming, neither of which i could really personally care about since Cliche never neccesarily meant bad and anatomy (while VERY important to learn) doesnt matter it if you can atleast make it feel like all the pieces go together, i would just like to point out the things that stick out for me. The front arm and the tail.
The arm looks okay untill the elbow joint. then it looks like it goes on longer than the rest, which is funky. try to make shoulder to elbow area and the elbow to hand area the same length. and as psychweasal said taper the tail when its close to the body.
P.S back in 2004 i got this, Learn how to draw manga: male characters book and the anotomy pics and hints in there are awesome. Keep an eye out for the series cuz a lot of the books are really cool.
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