So... This was a real brain drainer. It took many many weeks to get it to this stage. It took a while to add a little bit of this and remove the nasty bit of that.
More uplifting trance or dance this time.
Happiness with that slight touch of sadness.
Enjoy!
And for the people that listens to it through. Could you give some sort of critisism especially about the intro? I'm kinda not sure about it... Does it fit? If it doesn't what should be there?
This song kinda got to the point where I can't change the intro without it changing the whole feeling, but for the future productions...
More uplifting trance or dance this time.
Happiness with that slight touch of sadness.
Enjoy!
And for the people that listens to it through. Could you give some sort of critisism especially about the intro? I'm kinda not sure about it... Does it fit? If it doesn't what should be there?
This song kinda got to the point where I can't change the intro without it changing the whole feeling, but for the future productions...
Category Music / Trance
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 4.72 MB
Hey! Love the whole feelling but...
When the bass goes to the 3rd note at around 10 seconds it is quite discordant and umpleasant.
The 3rd bass note should be an "A" due to the key change not a "G#" The run should be "C# B A B" Not " C# B G# B"
There is my critisizm. XD
The intro does fit! Just that one thing at the begining is a little detering. Sowwy. I do this for a living so I have to make sure bands can accually produce a track that sounds good and will sell. Other than that this is really driving and awsome! <3
Hmm. yeah just fix that and I r happy, well I'm allways happy so. :D
Faved and +watched.
Have a listen to my stuff if you have the time!
When the bass goes to the 3rd note at around 10 seconds it is quite discordant and umpleasant.
The 3rd bass note should be an "A" due to the key change not a "G#" The run should be "C# B A B" Not " C# B G# B"
There is my critisizm. XD
The intro does fit! Just that one thing at the begining is a little detering. Sowwy. I do this for a living so I have to make sure bands can accually produce a track that sounds good and will sell. Other than that this is really driving and awsome! <3
Hmm. yeah just fix that and I r happy, well I'm allways happy so. :D
Faved and +watched.
Have a listen to my stuff if you have the time!
Oo thanks for a quick reply!
And don't be sorry! This is what I wanted anyways. ^^
And this is what I'm needing to get prepared for the demo sendings...
Umm, I'm quite sure the bass does go "C# B A B". I can't check it out right now since I switched to the laptop. Might be that the bass is a bit distorted or something to make it sound jaggy... I guess I'll have to check out the bassline and see if I can work it out. ^^
And thankies for the Fav + watch ^^
I'll definitely listen to your stuff tomorrow once I get on the primary computer again!
(Written with crossed eyes so there might be some funny words and stuff)
And don't be sorry! This is what I wanted anyways. ^^
And this is what I'm needing to get prepared for the demo sendings...
Umm, I'm quite sure the bass does go "C# B A B". I can't check it out right now since I switched to the laptop. Might be that the bass is a bit distorted or something to make it sound jaggy... I guess I'll have to check out the bassline and see if I can work it out. ^^
And thankies for the Fav + watch ^^
I'll definitely listen to your stuff tomorrow once I get on the primary computer again!
(Written with crossed eyes so there might be some funny words and stuff)
Well I was playing along, and I think your in a diff tuning. As the lead rift comes down in tone the bass follows but when it get to the "G#" thing something goes wrong. If I just play the lead with the bass it sounds...
God I have no idea. It just sounds... wrong. :( It's like you made a musical puzzle....
Well see tomorow.
God I have no idea. It just sounds... wrong. :( It's like you made a musical puzzle....
Well see tomorow.
Heheh, yeah... Talk about a musical puzzle... The bassline really does go "C# B A B". Anyways I tried to do some new basslines but they seem to do the same problem of not getting in the right tone.
I guess it's time to try another sound and... Well try to get that part to work. Gahh it's frustrating part though. Nothing just seems to work in there.
I guess it's time to try another sound and... Well try to get that part to work. Gahh it's frustrating part though. Nothing just seems to work in there.
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