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((Sorry for any typos and bad formatting. Had to write this on my phone as we have no power yet))
The Star is gone and his light in Colmaton has dimmed but life goes on. But it is not easy for everyone to cope - it is specially difficult for a certain cheetah. While Chris Jones is learning to live in a Perfect World, what is happening in Colmaton?
Thank you so much for
vivavulpes , 
Kitsune Shukko and 
GameGod210 for their help editing.
Nia Shasa/Oasis, Erica Decker/War Wolf, Janet O’Connel/Spectra, and Jonas Faraday belong to vivavulpes
Jason Mills/Slipstream belongs to GameGod210
Kuwanna Moore/Ranger, Dr. Sofia/Psyche, and Colmaton Universe belong to
TRAIN
Alkahest and Apex belong to Kitsune Shukko
Elaine Whitecloud/Morningstar, Dunston Howe/Dyno Donkey, and Bureau of Superheroes belong to
MojoRover
Jenna Ronfauni/Strikira and Gym Brats belong to
WolfRider
Erin Flaherty/Miracle belongs to
Sam Gwosdz
Joseph Thomas/Combat belongs to
jrcarter
Evay Lawson/Cyber Lynx and Brooklyn Koemi/Rocky by
MrDuHast
The Star is gone and his light in Colmaton has dimmed but life goes on. But it is not easy for everyone to cope - it is specially difficult for a certain cheetah. While Chris Jones is learning to live in a Perfect World, what is happening in Colmaton?
Thank you so much for
vivavulpes , 
Kitsune Shukko and 
GameGod210 for their help editing.Nia Shasa/Oasis, Erica Decker/War Wolf, Janet O’Connel/Spectra, and Jonas Faraday belong to
vivavulpesJason Mills/Slipstream belongs to
GameGod210Kuwanna Moore/Ranger, Dr. Sofia/Psyche, and Colmaton Universe belong to
TRAINAlkahest and Apex belong to
Kitsune ShukkoElaine Whitecloud/Morningstar, Dunston Howe/Dyno Donkey, and Bureau of Superheroes belong to
MojoRoverJenna Ronfauni/Strikira and Gym Brats belong to
WolfRiderErin Flaherty/Miracle belongs to
Sam GwosdzJoseph Thomas/Combat belongs to
jrcarterEvay Lawson/Cyber Lynx and Brooklyn Koemi/Rocky by
MrDuHast
Category Story / Fantasy
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File Size 47.6 kB
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This story was really well done and I mean that, yes it explores the aftermath of Chris' departure from Colmaton but he is not even physically in this story, even the beginning is nothing but a reminder of the past. You wrote this whole piece with nothing but dedication to doing other character's justice and exploring the consequences of Chris' departure for his friends and of course his love, Nia, who I think we all wish we could tell her this is all a terrible nightmare and that she'll wake up next to him in the morning.
You've come a long way as a writer and given that you braved two hurricanes and then managed to write this out on a cellphone is freaking amazing, only further cementing your ability as a writer! Wonderful job once again friend c:
This story was really well done and I mean that, yes it explores the aftermath of Chris' departure from Colmaton but he is not even physically in this story, even the beginning is nothing but a reminder of the past. You wrote this whole piece with nothing but dedication to doing other character's justice and exploring the consequences of Chris' departure for his friends and of course his love, Nia, who I think we all wish we could tell her this is all a terrible nightmare and that she'll wake up next to him in the morning.
You've come a long way as a writer and given that you braved two hurricanes and then managed to write this out on a cellphone is freaking amazing, only further cementing your ability as a writer! Wonderful job once again friend c:
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