Bittersweet Tales Ch. 17: Rest and Relaxation
After a long meeting that's left Emberflame's emotions battered and scattered all around, it seems her good friend Auron has caught onto the fact that maybe she needs a break! Where oh where could such thoughts lead?
I can't be arsed to describe this part as well as I want to, anyways. Fun story time! This chapter was originally meant to be EVEN MORE PLOT DUMP, with alot of stuff getting covered and alot of rather unsettling facts introduced; BUT the original result left me feeling really unsatisfied, and the rewrite I attempted for it also fell really flat. So after nearly creatively burning out over it, I talked with my good pal
furryshapeshifter and he suggested that perhaps its time to take a step back while I was still catching up on uploads and perhaps think about what I really want to write. A lot of thought provoking discussion later; and chapter 17 got rewritten to this more leisurely part that I think everybody can be happier with.
Clearspring is the product of
tastytales (Even though its not sold, or ya know... you get the idea.)
Blaine and the Spa (I can't remember the name sue me; *Disclaimer don't actually sue*) belong to
blankslate15
Emberflame and Shadow belongs to me
Auron belongs
furryshapeshifter
Pokemon © Nintendo and Gamefreak
I can't be arsed to describe this part as well as I want to, anyways. Fun story time! This chapter was originally meant to be EVEN MORE PLOT DUMP, with alot of stuff getting covered and alot of rather unsettling facts introduced; BUT the original result left me feeling really unsatisfied, and the rewrite I attempted for it also fell really flat. So after nearly creatively burning out over it, I talked with my good pal
furryshapeshifter and he suggested that perhaps its time to take a step back while I was still catching up on uploads and perhaps think about what I really want to write. A lot of thought provoking discussion later; and chapter 17 got rewritten to this more leisurely part that I think everybody can be happier with.Clearspring is the product of
tastytales (Even though its not sold, or ya know... you get the idea.)Blaine and the Spa (I can't remember the name sue me; *Disclaimer don't actually sue*) belong to
blankslate15Emberflame and Shadow belongs to me
Auron belongs
furryshapeshifterPokemon © Nintendo and Gamefreak
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