well i am still alive just can't seem to draw anymore...
this was fun though even though there are things i don't like about it, Tora with her new Dual Wield.
this was fun though even though there are things i don't like about it, Tora with her new Dual Wield.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Housecat
Size 1280 x 1273px
File Size 182.9 kB
okies first off the easy bits
1. Boobs got out of hand, didn't want them that big, again to lazy to fix them
2.Legs look odd, i think they need to be longer, but again i think it's just the boobs throwing off the whole composition.
3. i know i do alot of ''fast hands'' , but i don't like how this one turned out, and again i hand the sword drawn before i finished off the hand and it looks kinda lame.
4. the hair as much as i like how it turned out it isn't what i wanted , but that's cause i changed the wind.
those are the things i don't like so much.
1. Boobs got out of hand, didn't want them that big, again to lazy to fix them
2.Legs look odd, i think they need to be longer, but again i think it's just the boobs throwing off the whole composition.
3. i know i do alot of ''fast hands'' , but i don't like how this one turned out, and again i hand the sword drawn before i finished off the hand and it looks kinda lame.
4. the hair as much as i like how it turned out it isn't what i wanted , but that's cause i changed the wind.
those are the things i don't like so much.
I never thought there could be such a thing as "too big" XP But I get what you mean, they can almost compete with how you draw Gigi's. I do really like the armor "bra" though, with the lace to hold the top, and the bindings over her chest just below her scarf that accentuate the masses ^^
If I actually try to measure the bending leg (I'm not sure if it's the left one with a skirt in the way or the right one crossing over the left), the fore-leg does seem a bit long compared to its thigh. But the sword is so thick it makes a sort of optical illusion anyways, so I didn't even notice at first ^^;
Hmm... I have no idea how one would go about wielding a sword that size, so I can't tell if the hand looks lame. Though it does sorta look like it's missing a finger, I think.
I don't know how the wind should be hitting the hair (I mean, the bust would probably deflect it upward or something), but the overall shape of her hair and the expression on her face... It works out sooo well o.o It really brings out the "Tora-charm" in the picture, leaving me all warm and fuzzy inside X3
Considering the complexity of the piece, I'm surprised you're able to notice some of those minor issues ^^; I've got a looong way to go XD You do armor and action poses so well though, I think you should definately do more. Like, maybe some more scenes from your DnD campaign, and not just the action shots of you and Stel making out XD (though more naughty stuff would be very welcome too X3)
If I actually try to measure the bending leg (I'm not sure if it's the left one with a skirt in the way or the right one crossing over the left), the fore-leg does seem a bit long compared to its thigh. But the sword is so thick it makes a sort of optical illusion anyways, so I didn't even notice at first ^^;
Hmm... I have no idea how one would go about wielding a sword that size, so I can't tell if the hand looks lame. Though it does sorta look like it's missing a finger, I think.
I don't know how the wind should be hitting the hair (I mean, the bust would probably deflect it upward or something), but the overall shape of her hair and the expression on her face... It works out sooo well o.o It really brings out the "Tora-charm" in the picture, leaving me all warm and fuzzy inside X3
Considering the complexity of the piece, I'm surprised you're able to notice some of those minor issues ^^; I've got a looong way to go XD You do armor and action poses so well though, I think you should definately do more. Like, maybe some more scenes from your DnD campaign, and not just the action shots of you and Stel making out XD (though more naughty stuff would be very welcome too X3)
i'm gonna try drawing warrior tora more often now, Gigi wants me to do another at this bust size, along with her character, but after that i'll go back to drawing her normal, and more action and fighting stuff ^^, also i notice everything cause i worked on it :P, people don't notice as much as the one that worked on it :P
Lovely work sweetie! I like what you've done with the hair; different and cool-looking. Also, the shine seems more pronounced, which is also good. Maybe 'cause you've done the hair blacker than usual?
The armour is great, and I love the expression. Kinda like 'yeah, I'll kick your arse if you come over here' :P
I'm not sure, but I /think/ the legs might not be quite the same length ^^; At first I thought they were just disproportionate, but that's just the huge swords throwing me off and I can see they're not now. But it's a small thing, and other than that I love it!
Great dust effect by the feet, by the way. Oh, and um... I think you grew a bit. :*
The armour is great, and I love the expression. Kinda like 'yeah, I'll kick your arse if you come over here' :P
I'm not sure, but I /think/ the legs might not be quite the same length ^^; At first I thought they were just disproportionate, but that's just the huge swords throwing me off and I can see they're not now. But it's a small thing, and other than that I love it!
Great dust effect by the feet, by the way. Oh, and um... I think you grew a bit. :*
Artist blocks make me sad :( You'll get over it though, maybe not even before long if you can draw this still, heh.
Warrior Tora looks awesome, as always. I honestly can't find what you probably don't like about it. I myself think the one sword's hilt is pretty neat, like you could detach the blade if it broke somehow and use the hilt as a mace. The pose is great, and I like the facial expression--it's kinda like she's saying, "I thought this fight was supposed to be a tough one?"
A nice upgrade to the roster of abilities, too... Given the size of the weapons, I'm guessing she's got monkey grip too, heh.
I was gonna say that something else besides her skills upgraded too, but I looked back at a couple other Warrior Tora pics and that might not be true :P
Warrior Tora looks awesome, as always. I honestly can't find what you probably don't like about it. I myself think the one sword's hilt is pretty neat, like you could detach the blade if it broke somehow and use the hilt as a mace. The pose is great, and I like the facial expression--it's kinda like she's saying, "I thought this fight was supposed to be a tough one?"
A nice upgrade to the roster of abilities, too... Given the size of the weapons, I'm guessing she's got monkey grip too, heh.
I was gonna say that something else besides her skills upgraded too, but I looked back at a couple other Warrior Tora pics and that might not be true :P
The skill is how not to cut your own boobs off with the swords. It's why in my rare D&D Buzz pics, she uses a spear.
All goofing aside, it's a swank picture, Tora. You have a good eye for doing fantasy costumes. I envy your talents and that aint just my blowing smoke. Keep it up.
All goofing aside, it's a swank picture, Tora. You have a good eye for doing fantasy costumes. I envy your talents and that aint just my blowing smoke. Keep it up.
cool pic! look slike somethings been eating y our swords. have y ou checked for metal snails?
I tried dual welding in real life once. almost burt down the work shop :D
after I sorted out my dyslexia I tried dual wield at a LRP event and was awesome (yay for being ambidextrious)... but kept ketting mobbed while posing.
I tried dual welding in real life once. almost burt down the work shop :D
after I sorted out my dyslexia I tried dual wield at a LRP event and was awesome (yay for being ambidextrious)... but kept ketting mobbed while posing.
Mm ... I wish I had some advice that might help. I think you might be trying too hard and just need to relax and refresh yourself. These other things will sort themselves out ... it works for me. A lot of the time, I have to work AGAINST the meds that I take in order to get work done on the weekends. Often I'm so tired and wish nothing more than to sleep ... when it's time to work on studio stuff, I often find myself wishing for a nap ... so, there's my problem. :)
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