Transformers: In the face of the Enemy Chapter one [Pages 5-
by Cynergi
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19 years ago
last half of the First Chapter of my Story ^_^
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jaffah
~jaffah
kool, nice start for the first chapter, i can remember the cartoon in which the Headmasters and Targetmasters first appeared so i found it easy to follow. good work =)
BlackHeartSpiral
~blackheartspiral
Yar! Love how you portrayed Galvatron! Even though I still dislike him compared to Megs...^^; The way you played him out was good, none the less! And poor Cyclonus...oh well, thats what you get for working with a crazy loon I suppose. XD I've never seen the Headmaster's show (only heard of it) so I can only guess at whats going on-still, I am entralled by the tale and await more! :D
Wolfprime
~wolfprime
getting interesting
tundra_arctic_wolf
~tundraarcticwolf
Wow. Very interesting and sweet story, cynergi.
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