For me, I found that it took just a little too long before it started becoming a bit more up-beat and faster. I was starting to get used to it being a sort of slow trancey sort of piece, and then it goes into all this sound (I don't know any musical terms xD; ) But maybe you were going for that, art can be weird like that :P

I liked it after it picked up though, but I think in future, maybe, shorten the intro more.
Other than that it was good =)

It starts as a break on purpose, in the grand scheme of things in the album it makes sense. :D Thanks for the input! (Also, be aware this song is like two years old, hehe.)

Nice work here.