Did Krystal just take a chomp of his hand?

Deliberately dropped her overboard

Oh... Makes sense now looking at it again.

Why the hell did you keep Krystal getting thrown overboard?

Are you, like... Gonna aggressively nit pick and complain about everything I do in my rendition or...? Because you've done this frequently and it's testing my patience.

I kept it because it happens in-game and it adds a bit of suspense. Is that so wrong? If I had everything turn out 100% perfect like you want it to, it wouldn't be interesting. If you don't like it that's fine! You don't have to. But why go through the trouble of trying to guilt me and make me change what I already have planned? If you keep having that kind of attitude you're gonna continue to get upset as my story goes on.

Why does it matter so much to you? You can go write your own story if you think it should be told differently. Or you can go check out The_Other_Black_bear's comic since that seems to be much more up your alley. It's on hiatus at the moment but he plans to pick it back up eventually.

On a final note, if you keep harrassing/complaining about the moves I make then I'll be forced to block you. I REALLY don't want to do that because you seem to care to some degree, and blocking people makes me feel bad. But you've commented several times with complaints and private messaged me with them as well. That's not cool. So please, stop leaving comments like this and/or stop reading if it's bothering you this much. It's not doing either of us any favors. :(

Alright, I’ll stop leaving comments like this, but I’m still not fond of how you left in Krystal getting thrown overboard. It’s not really interesting, & people want to retcon it, among other things. As for The_Other_Black_bear’s comic, it’s pretty much over. He said that in a status update or journal on DeviantArt.

Like I said, you don't have to be fond of what I do, nor find it interesting in your opinion. I know my rendition isn't objectively amazing or anything. But I'll be real with you: You're the only person to make a fuss. At least to my face.

Plus, this IS a retcon, believe it or not. I've changed plenty of things for the near future and distant future, and have many DP/original things to add to the mix as well. The story has only just begun and you're already shooting it down. But if that means nothing to you, then I don't think you should read on. Which is ok! Again, I don't mind if some people don't like my story. It would be incredibly wrong of me to think what I'm doing is flawless and should be adored by everyone. But keeping this up isn't good for your health, at the very least.

As for others who want to retcon it, they usually can/will recon it themselves if they're unhappy with SFA's handling of Krystal and faulty story. Which is also why I'm doing what I'm doing, even if it doesn't seem like it to you.

If it helps, no matter how bad it seems, everything that happens is important to my entire plot. Take that how you will. There will always be reasons to every event, you have my word on that.

Okay.