Inspired by: The Witcher 3: Wild Hunt OST - After the Storm
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1250 x 682px
File Size 526.9 kB
How I did not see this in my submissions box?!
Lovely piece, although there are few things bothering me. One being the giant sword laying on the board, it looks enormous and extremely heavy, other thing is that I don't think any treasure should be on the board, everything valuable would be hidden on safer lower deck, and the last thing would be the color of the water, light You've set on this piece (except for some metal parts on the left side for some reason, cyan tint there) appears to tint everything with orange-pinkish (might be my dying monitor, could be just orange) light (not on the metal parts though), which looks really good but it should have effect on the water splash as well, now it's too vivid and doesn't fit with the color of the light at all.
As always lovely composition, sky is just gorgeous, board texture is nice, but they seem planed and perfectly flat, not to mention they seem to be made out of concrete because of the treasure chest penetrating it. It doesn't look natural, just a hole for the chest, no cracks, no splints, and the wood pieces seem to be coming out of nowhere for no reason really.
When it comes to art's composition, light and setting Your work is on point, but I think You could give it a bit more thought as in "behind the scenes", don't think of objects on Your art as of props, don't put them in just because they could possibly look good, do a very quick and minor story for them, where were they before this scene happened, how did they get in this place, how heavy are they, how would they affect the surface they hit, stuff like that, it would add sense and depth to Your art. You executed it perfectly with the mast though!
You're really weird to me as an artist, I can't tell what it is, but from all artists I follow You're the only one I regularly check to see if I didn't miss anything, one's art I genuinely wait for with anticipation and curiosity. Even though You usually make a lot of mistakes, Your art is truly special to me, it may seem a bit corny but I think we may feel the same way about art, put all our emotions into it, the huge difference between us being resolve... Looking at Your gallery I see You have a ton of it, I envy Your motivation. I often struggle to pick up the pencil or tablet pen and start drawing. But that something I see in Your art always pushes me towards it, it may seem corny as I said but it's beyond my logic.
Tell me, how do You feel about collaboration? One timer, I thought about it for some time and I'd love to draw at least one art with You, if it works maybe even more in the future if time allows and if You're willing too, obviously!
Lovely piece, although there are few things bothering me. One being the giant sword laying on the board, it looks enormous and extremely heavy, other thing is that I don't think any treasure should be on the board, everything valuable would be hidden on safer lower deck, and the last thing would be the color of the water, light You've set on this piece (except for some metal parts on the left side for some reason, cyan tint there) appears to tint everything with orange-pinkish (might be my dying monitor, could be just orange) light (not on the metal parts though), which looks really good but it should have effect on the water splash as well, now it's too vivid and doesn't fit with the color of the light at all.
As always lovely composition, sky is just gorgeous, board texture is nice, but they seem planed and perfectly flat, not to mention they seem to be made out of concrete because of the treasure chest penetrating it. It doesn't look natural, just a hole for the chest, no cracks, no splints, and the wood pieces seem to be coming out of nowhere for no reason really.
When it comes to art's composition, light and setting Your work is on point, but I think You could give it a bit more thought as in "behind the scenes", don't think of objects on Your art as of props, don't put them in just because they could possibly look good, do a very quick and minor story for them, where were they before this scene happened, how did they get in this place, how heavy are they, how would they affect the surface they hit, stuff like that, it would add sense and depth to Your art. You executed it perfectly with the mast though!
You're really weird to me as an artist, I can't tell what it is, but from all artists I follow You're the only one I regularly check to see if I didn't miss anything, one's art I genuinely wait for with anticipation and curiosity. Even though You usually make a lot of mistakes, Your art is truly special to me, it may seem a bit corny but I think we may feel the same way about art, put all our emotions into it, the huge difference between us being resolve... Looking at Your gallery I see You have a ton of it, I envy Your motivation. I often struggle to pick up the pencil or tablet pen and start drawing. But that something I see in Your art always pushes me towards it, it may seem corny as I said but it's beyond my logic.
Tell me, how do You feel about collaboration? One timer, I thought about it for some time and I'd love to draw at least one art with You, if it works maybe even more in the future if time allows and if You're willing too, obviously!
Again, thanks for the advice. I really did not think about the boards. But through the gold on the deck, I wanted to show what strength was the storm. But after thinking it over, I realized that this is really silly. But sometimes, for the spectacle of the picture, need to give it a not lot of absurdity.
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