The face is coming along very well. I can see only one thing that I would correct there, and it is very small--I would tilt the nose a bit more to the right, to balance the direction of the muzzle. The facial shape itself is really good!

Perhaps give her right (our left) shoulder a bit more definition to show how it connects to the top of the arm. I hope that doesn't sound funny? And on that same side, make the curve of the side of her torso a little more obvious. I would remark on the chest, but I don't know your plans for anything on top of it, as in, if there is going to be a shirt or some kind of support holding the breasts, or if there is nothing to be worn (in which case, I can't blame her 'cause it's Summer and the heat is blah!).

I think that her tail is perfect, and her feet look very smooth and nice. Maybe on her right leg (again, our left), you could keep the curve of the calf higher up, but thin it down a bit more as you get towards the ankle. I find the calf-to ankle transition a bit difficult sometimes, actually.

I hope this was okay, I don't typically critique, haha. It's looking really great so far!!

She's just gunna be naked, I love the character's markings too much to put clothes on her.
--

Thanks for the help on the torso and face though, I see what you mean about the calves, I always mush the calf/ankle area up a lot too.
--

Thanks for the tips and your critique was great.

Cute pose, Mazz. I would look a little into hand tutorials about how to make them look more sleek, or hey, even contact me about it sometime. I can give you some tips, hands are always difficult to get used to drawing. :b

Apart from the left arm, which seems a bit like it's a skittle leaning against her shoulder, the positioning looks alright. Keep working at it. :D

I need to sit down and just do a hand study(my drawing teacher in 2006 told me that but I don't listen well).

Lol, yea her left arm is terrible, I got too mad at the legs and chest to even work on it after I kind of pasted it in. Thank you for the critique. <3

The thighs (upper parts of the legs) need to be fatter imo.

<3 Yea, that right thigh of hers looks a bit small for sure.

The pose is awesome, I'd make the thigh(s; only one visible) thicker, and I'd lower her bewblies a bit, maybe part them, or make them a little more realistically saggy.

And the face looks perfect, except for the nose; looks like it could be brought over just a TINY bit (to the left).

I think the feet should not be pointing the same direction like they are. Either point the right one more towards the viewer, or point the left one more towards the center of the picture.

Thank you, I see what you mean about the face as well as the feet.

I think You've heard it commented on a bit, but I'm going to go specifically towards the part I like: the lower half of the female body 8) <3 (Besides the face, of course! That's N/A Here, though.)

For some reason, it looks like she has no buttocks-- you might be able to fix this by making her butt bigger (that is, it essentially looks like she has no room at the bottom of her pelvis for her vagina and anus). What I REALLY mean is make the bottom of her pelvis longer (distance between front and back). That way, her butt goes down, as well a where the legs end. Did that make any sense? D:

yes, that made sense.

thank you

No trailing period? :s I hope I didn't bug you with critique you didn't ask for. :/

lol, nah I just got lazy with my reply. I'm never bugged by critique. I see what you mean about her lack of butt, I really should erase the tail and draw it before putting the tail in to get the parts poking out to look right.

Heya! I busted out a redline, here http://i281.photobucket.com/albums/.....zz_redline.png The face is really cute, I like it. The nose is a little off-center, and the head is sloped a little, and her chin is a bit too long. Her boobs could do with being lower, and her shoulders are a bit square. Her upper arm is a little thick compared to the forearm, (the visible one). Her hand wasn't quite curling enough around the "blob" lol it looks like she might drop it. I just drew in the butt even though it was mentioned lol. ALso, just a suggestion with where to point her other foot. I love how natural the pose is though, and the tail is adorable, and like I said, the face is really cute <3 Hope I could help out even just a little.

this helps out a lot actually. Thank you so much, the visuals I get from redlines are always so amazingly helpful.

I like your idea on the foot, I've had a few people with similar ones/

you're welcome! :D Glad I could help.

do you mind if I redline it for you? it's easier for me to show you what i think then to say it :3

Go for it, I have a few already but the more people who do it the more mistakes I tend to have pointed out before I ink. I'll probably try to get the sketch done and inked later tonight or tomorrow so if you can do it before then it would be more helpful then after.