A song I wrote for a relationship that is no more.
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I must say what a song! What peacefulness and mind soothing! Yes, indeed.
What I envision is a bit different than your other songs. Instead of a smooth sequential scenes that come to my mind with your other songs - it’s a bit different with this one as I mention. At first, when the song really begins at about 10 seconds in, I imagine you (Jaiko) walking though a darkness with a lit, smooth beam of moonlight shining down on him. As he walks little ripples of water resonate from his feet, as if he is walking on black water. At 1:26 I love the song further, it seems to be an electric piano starting to play. As you already know I love pianos and organs. ANYWAY when that begins at 1:26 the scene fades and I can see Jaiko and Zephyrr laying together in a pile of silk linens. Then from 1:23 all the way to 4:20 I continue to see Jaiko and Zephyrr embracing each other on the flowing linen sheets. Ever so often the scene fades and I see Jaiko’s hand slowing tracing the delicate curves of Zephyrr’s face and body; sensually and tenderly - these are brief scenes with Jaiko’s hands and fading back to them laying in the linens caressing, embracing and even sweetly kissing one another’s neck, cheek and mouth. Simply a very peaceful-tasteful love scene. Then after that point, 4:20, the scene fades once more back to Jaiko walking in the darkness merely lit with the moonlight and when the cool electronic piano melody returns rose pedals begin to fall from above and delicately rain around Jaiko to the dark floor and seemingly to float on the invisible black water. Finally when the song itself ends and only water is heard I see Jaiko reaching a steam with a small waterfall possibly with Zephyrr there, waiting patiently for the one true love, Jaiko with a sparkle in the eye.
Overall such a wonderful-great song! So good!
I must say what a song! What peacefulness and mind soothing! Yes, indeed.
What I envision is a bit different than your other songs. Instead of a smooth sequential scenes that come to my mind with your other songs - it’s a bit different with this one as I mention. At first, when the song really begins at about 10 seconds in, I imagine you (Jaiko) walking though a darkness with a lit, smooth beam of moonlight shining down on him. As he walks little ripples of water resonate from his feet, as if he is walking on black water. At 1:26 I love the song further, it seems to be an electric piano starting to play. As you already know I love pianos and organs. ANYWAY when that begins at 1:26 the scene fades and I can see Jaiko and Zephyrr laying together in a pile of silk linens. Then from 1:23 all the way to 4:20 I continue to see Jaiko and Zephyrr embracing each other on the flowing linen sheets. Ever so often the scene fades and I see Jaiko’s hand slowing tracing the delicate curves of Zephyrr’s face and body; sensually and tenderly - these are brief scenes with Jaiko’s hands and fading back to them laying in the linens caressing, embracing and even sweetly kissing one another’s neck, cheek and mouth. Simply a very peaceful-tasteful love scene. Then after that point, 4:20, the scene fades once more back to Jaiko walking in the darkness merely lit with the moonlight and when the cool electronic piano melody returns rose pedals begin to fall from above and delicately rain around Jaiko to the dark floor and seemingly to float on the invisible black water. Finally when the song itself ends and only water is heard I see Jaiko reaching a steam with a small waterfall possibly with Zephyrr there, waiting patiently for the one true love, Jaiko with a sparkle in the eye.
Overall such a wonderful-great song! So good!
Is that some Slayer II I hear? x3 I'm really glad to see you get such good use from it.
There's a lot of pentatonics in this song as well. You know how I like those. XD The beat that comes in halfway through is .. oddly enough reminiscent of bluegrass music. It's a nice touch, as are the roaming rhythm notes that sound like they're played on the same bass as the bassline.
Also, I haven't seen you on MSN yet. :(
There's a lot of pentatonics in this song as well. You know how I like those. XD The beat that comes in halfway through is .. oddly enough reminiscent of bluegrass music. It's a nice touch, as are the roaming rhythm notes that sound like they're played on the same bass as the bassline.
Also, I haven't seen you on MSN yet. :(
Pentatonics are... well if you're a keyboardist, hit all the black keys on your keyboard. Bamf! Pentatonics. xD They're popular mostly in traditional Asian music. Sucks you're back at The Corpse. Means you probably never got to hear my stuff, let alone the fact we didn't get to talk. :(
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