very nicely written ^_^

Very nice. I haven't seen this type of storyline before. Nicely done with the descriptions of the transformation. Although I think you could of used a few more words insead of mutilate, I saw that one quite a lot. Keep it up =D.

I really enjoyed this one. I haven't played the game in years, so I never had the opportunity to use a Flygon. But the more I see them, the more I like them.

But how off the subject is that? Except for a few spelling and punctuation errors, it's a very good story. *Is fascinated with human/Pokemon transformation.* You did have me a little scared it was going to be a sad ending for a moment though.

peculiar very peculiar.....i like it!