Very nice!

There's really not a lot to fix. I mean, if you reeeeeeally wanted, I could probably think of something, like maybe the bowl's too small or something. But it's very nice! Very different from how I'd imagined it, but nice! ^_^

Of course, I probably should have considered that whipped cream looks similar to another white, viscous fluid that seems to be popular in the furry community. >_<

As agreed, I'll provide payment upon completion of the second pic. (Erm, that is what we agreed, right? Please inform me if I'm wrong.)

Thanks! But are you sure you're ok with this? Because anything less than good enough, just isn't good enough. And I'll see about fixing the bowl.

Also the rule plays that if you dont compare things (i.e. the whipped cream to the other "fluid") less people would think about it. ^^;

And you are correct, after I finish the second pic. But only after you're 100% pleased with both of them. Or pleased enough. :D

Well ... I'm not sure how much you can do, short of a total redo. The way I'd envisioned it, it was kinda like a shoujo anime, with him popping his head out of a giant bowl of cream and looking at the audience, and a very bright background, possibly involving pink flowers, like Honey-senpai from Ouran High School Host Club.

Still, I really like this way too. I wish he was looking out at the audience, but it would probably look odd given his current posture. Maybe if the eyes were closed? Like in pleasure? Or maybe not.

Nyaa~. Picky picky, that's me. But if you're working on the bowl, maybe you could make it a bit ... cuter? Like, maybe pink with white bunnies or something like that?

Sorry about the delayed response, I'll try to fix this as much as possible. My bad ^^;

Oh, and maybe make the copper in his feathers a little brighter, a little less "blah"?

Oh, umm ... didn't notice it before, but there's something weird with the tail. I think it should be a little thicker. Not the feathery bobble on the end, but the tail itself. I mean, it probably shouldn't taper to a point like that before it turns into feathers, if you catch my drift.

just... too... cute... -explodes into a fiery pit of ashes-

Clean up on aisle 4!