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Finally back in action. Here's my very first slime girl, Sorela, now upgraded appropiately. Now depicted with a very loose body, she is constantly in a semi-liquefied state and surrounded by whispy slime particles due to magical and genetic mutations on her body. She is effectively a very powerful shadow slime, capable of body possessions. Unlike Kia, Sorela takes over all bodily functions and transforms her hosts to liken them in her vein.
Unlike her insane persona when she was first introduced and created, Sorela is far more composed, better self-restraint and almost silent. Like a lone wolf, she follows her own rules and path. Sorela attempts to make up for her past crimes for the sake of becoming 'normal' so appears more like an anti-hero due to her methods.
Unlike her insane persona when she was first introduced and created, Sorela is far more composed, better self-restraint and almost silent. Like a lone wolf, she follows her own rules and path. Sorela attempts to make up for her past crimes for the sake of becoming 'normal' so appears more like an anti-hero due to her methods.
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Feline (Other)
Size 1280 x 1086px
File Size 71.3 kB
*reads the dialogue...only to constantly have my attention drawn towards Sorela*
Well I'm certainly impressed with this revision, both in design and story. She definitely feels like a lone wolf, if anything else I'm really hoping that she actually develops a muzzle, then she'd look bitchin'. ^^
Well I'm certainly impressed with this revision, both in design and story. She definitely feels like a lone wolf, if anything else I'm really hoping that she actually develops a muzzle, then she'd look bitchin'. ^^
well (and this is speculation because i dont know how'd you write her exactly) imagine a character has, for the majority of the series, been low and serious. She might say something kinda funny sometimes, but she has been painted since her debut chapter as mostly calm and reserved. Now during a serious fight against some claymore swinging manatee, the character goes bat crap crazy. Ripping out the intestines and choking the enemy with them crazy, as id imagine from a character of yours. This would be a huge character shift. A shift that if not properly set up, will feel insulting and annoying to the reader. A shift that if continued with out a decent explanation, will contine to feel insulting and annoying. A character that jumps between Jin (Samurai Champloo) to Gluttony (FMA) every other fight with out any clear reason other than stating "well she just crazy" is not believable. Crazy is the kind of story device you dont ham-hand into a plot. it really does require some proper foreshadowing and subtle reminders. Of course labeling it bi-polar disfunction is also an available option, if you want the easy, lazy way out.
now, so this long-ass reply doesnt bite me later, im not saying in any way you cant write a story, (sry if I insult you with even thinking you'd think that, just covering my ground here) im just pointing out the way i have seen people mess this up, like you asked. Just know mean, cynical people will call you out on it if you do it half-assed like i said above.
so sry for this big reply, its just that this isnt the kind of stuff you can describe in one or two sentences.
now, so this long-ass reply doesnt bite me later, im not saying in any way you cant write a story, (sry if I insult you with even thinking you'd think that, just covering my ground here) im just pointing out the way i have seen people mess this up, like you asked. Just know mean, cynical people will call you out on it if you do it half-assed like i said above.
so sry for this big reply, its just that this isnt the kind of stuff you can describe in one or two sentences.
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