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Lara and Tina

By Draco135,
posted 16 years ago Writer

This is the story of how Lara got so big, and an introduction for Tina.
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Tina: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2433512
Lara: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1795111/

(Note: The events in this story are later reffered to as the Gym Incident.)

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Namrepus221 ~namrepus221

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16 years ago

Not bad.

A little short. But it shows some potential if it were, *ahem* exp[anded as it were.

Ya really have a way about the chracters in your stories, the dialogue really kinda flows.

Draco135 ~draco135

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16 years ago

*blushes* well, I'm not really that good I admit, but thanks for the comment. And yes it is short. What do you mean by 'expanded' BTW? ':)

Namrepus221 ~namrepus221

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16 years ago

Made a little longer, explain some back story about some of the characters and such. As it is, it drops you into the middle of a world.

Not to mention the how and why Tina grew as she did

Draco135 ~draco135

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16 years ago

True, true. I originally planned it like that as an introduction for some characters like Tina. I wasn't going to do her backstory if no one was interested. Plus, it's meant to be a nice short read, nothing too complicated.

Namrepus221 ~namrepus221

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16 years ago

Yeah I can see that.

Could always deleve into doing somethign along the lines of smaller stand alone pieces that are part of a larger arc. But I dunno if you'd wanna try that.

Draco135 ~draco135

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16 years ago

well I'm not into a 'OMG groundbreaking four part story!!!' too much. I think I'll do Tina's back story to explain her abit.

Namrepus221 ~namrepus221

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16 years ago

Well that's not what I'm saying.

Look at a guy named "Graveyardgreg" (he's on here)

He has a story set with a word limit of I believe 365 words for a single part of an over arcing storyline. Small chunks to tell a large story.

Draco135 ~draco135

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16 years ago

I understand that. It's just I don't think I'm ready for something like that yet. I'll stick to short ones for now.

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