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And onto the next commission we go! This one for 
Okamiiii and involving Starscream Prime from Transformers Prime.
Here, the cunning yet arrogant Starscream, after getting barred from consuming any more Energon Rations from the Decepticons, decides to turn to another source for his overindulgence.
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY RUBS, BLOATING, WEIGHT GAIN, BURPING, HEAPING LOADS OF SMUGNESS.
Not your thing? Keep on strolling. If it's your thing? Enjoy!
Okamiiii and involving Starscream Prime from Transformers Prime.Here, the cunning yet arrogant Starscream, after getting barred from consuming any more Energon Rations from the Decepticons, decides to turn to another source for his overindulgence.
CONTAINS THE FOLLOWING: BELLY RUBS, BLOATING, WEIGHT GAIN, BURPING, HEAPING LOADS OF SMUGNESS.
Not your thing? Keep on strolling. If it's your thing? Enjoy!
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 67px
File Size 116.1 kB
Listed in Folders
Whelp...yet another one to add to the fav pile.
God, I love this one so much, partially because I love Transformers, and partially because the story itself is amazing. Just the gradual process of Screamer growing more and more painfully full (and more and more intoxicated) hits all the right notes. The little monologues were hilarious, and Starscream's personality and mannerisms were really spot on. And something tells me that Megatron won't be pleased when his second-in-command limps his way back to base...
As always, you did an awesome job! Now you have me thinking about other Transformer related stories for you to write...
God, I love this one so much, partially because I love Transformers, and partially because the story itself is amazing. Just the gradual process of Screamer growing more and more painfully full (and more and more intoxicated) hits all the right notes. The little monologues were hilarious, and Starscream's personality and mannerisms were really spot on. And something tells me that Megatron won't be pleased when his second-in-command limps his way back to base...
As always, you did an awesome job! Now you have me thinking about other Transformer related stories for you to write...
Thanks. I'm very glad that you enjoyed the ride.
It was surprising how fun Starscream was to write for, but the situation lent itself to all the usual antics and an extra layer of satisfaction by having such a smug person dealt with the way he was by the end.
And of course, any you'd like to see, I'd love to hear.
It was surprising how fun Starscream was to write for, but the situation lent itself to all the usual antics and an extra layer of satisfaction by having such a smug person dealt with the way he was by the end.
And of course, any you'd like to see, I'd love to hear.
You're welcome...and thanks to you, I'm trying to imagine what a bloated robot looks like...XD
Yeah, Screamer deserves every last bit of punishment, both from the Autobots, or self inflicted in the form of an energy-induced bellyache.
Well, there is one thing that comes to mind, and this time, it takes place in the Transformers: Beast Wars universe. In summary, it's kinda inspired by this: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8540330/
Yeah, Screamer deserves every last bit of punishment, both from the Autobots, or self inflicted in the form of an energy-induced bellyache.
Well, there is one thing that comes to mind, and this time, it takes place in the Transformers: Beast Wars universe. In summary, it's kinda inspired by this: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8540330/
Heheh, I'd imagine he couldn't even transform into his jet form after...THANK YOU for adding the bits about slight intoxication after ingesting too much energon, that was just perfect. Aaand drunk hiccups are adorable. This was better than I ever imagined, you wrote Starscream pretty damn perfect Seriously, this is fantastic-will certainly consider commissioning again!
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