Eyes in the Dark pg. 22
WOW! This is a blast from the past This is page 22 of a children's book that I did when I was in school. I...just like this page It's the first time Shadow meets Dart. ...I bet you can guess who's who! Anyway, I think I will have to one day redo this. I really enjoyed working on it...moreso than working on comics. This might be the way that I need to work. But, we'll see
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Wolf
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Thank you very much! ^_^ Yes, Dart is a wolf, but Shadow is also a wolf. It's...a long story. I should probably upload the rest of it. It's slightly embarrassing since it's quite old, though. The drawings aren't the best and the writing, I've come to realize, could be a lot better. But, perhaps I'll get the rest of it up, even so ^_^
Aww, you're the sweetest!! *glomps* Actually, that is the problem with the writing as I look at it now. It wasn't simple enough for a children's book. I didn't notice it before, but I had a few complex words in it that I could have substituted for something else. But, I think I will show the rest of it so you can judge for yourself
*can't help but giggle*
Ohhh, hahaha... that is just so cute, and that last line! Oh man that had me giggling! "See what I could smell"... I can totally understand that line ina children's book, and even for grown-up fiction it's a completely correct line, but I just still find it very funny! =~.^=
Ohhh, hahaha... that is just so cute, and that last line! Oh man that had me giggling! "See what I could smell"... I can totally understand that line ina children's book, and even for grown-up fiction it's a completely correct line, but I just still find it very funny! =~.^=
*giggles cheerfully and helps the lioness back up*
Hee hee, you're welcome! Hee, and yes, as a writer and a born proofreader, I could totally not help seeing that line and finding it really amusing! And looking at all the comments and your responses to it, I can only say; yay! I will be so looking forward to seeing the entire story! I have no doubt I am going to be enjoying it so very very much! =^_^=
Hee hee, you're welcome! Hee, and yes, as a writer and a born proofreader, I could totally not help seeing that line and finding it really amusing! And looking at all the comments and your responses to it, I can only say; yay! I will be so looking forward to seeing the entire story! I have no doubt I am going to be enjoying it so very very much! =^_^=
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