Not a bad job, everything blends in just fine to me.

Thanks. It's rather messy, now that I see the full size. xD I did the entire drawing zoomed out and forgot it was even this large. Aha.

The perspectives just need major workkkk

Yeah, did kinda notice the full view messed with it a bit. Judging by the strokes I could figure that you were working from a distance :P

The colors are the thing that bothers me.

Other than that, you have your own technique, and that's awesome. It's good, I just think it is too bland with color.

Great job. :D

It's.. It's not my own technique. 8C It's seriously bad perspective, and I actually need help with it. I appreciate your trying to make me feel better, but some things are really trying to learn the rules. I don't know the rules yet. I can't break them. Thus it can't be my style or technique.

I think i would have gone nuts if I tried to make this is colour instead of black and white. Also I was trying to show more depth and seperation, by the contrasts of the shades.

-Chinthumbs- >8C~ hmm.

Maybe try making the background colors more transparent, or really light greys.

And the actual characters more darker colors.

So it makes the characters details, and the character itself stand out.
:)

I don't really want them to stand out so much. Uh.. o.o Plus, the place where they're at? The background is rather dark. Dark wood and such, and stone. Mostly a burgundy colour. I guess could go the opposite in the future for this place-make the characters brighter. But still, I'm mainly looking to learn how to do perspective--but your other advice isn't going unappreciated. C:

Sorry it wasn't that good. xD

I don't know exactly what you're going with. xD