I took s Advice but not advice.
He mentioned the topic of her legs in the last picture.
And i got to thinking.. Wow.. Hes Right.. I have a weakness in my Pictures. I cut off the legs ... alot..

So i redrew her.. and changed a few things.
So tell me.. Which version do you like better?
And anyother tips?


Age: 17
Darla is actually older then she seems. Shes a Junior and an expert in Water. She can be underestimated because of her size and her spacey attitude.

But she actually moves very fast and is amazingly concentrated. The last thing you want to fight her is in the rain or in the water. But she is never serious and she seems gullible.

Her true feelings she hides inside and she throws others of by faking an emotion or an idea. She applied to be a student teacher but hasn't heard back from the school since Freshman year. She pretty much hates focusing on things like Video Games and Reading.
She would rather swim and play sports.


I think im gonna redo the caterpie man too. I need to put more thought into my characters.