Another upload. Starting off with the chapter with Akire's history (finally.) It's been 3 years, and looking back from this page to page 4 there is quite the difference...
Heads/Faces: Better.
Bodies: Better.
Coloring: Better.
Text: Better.
Comic Boxes: Way Better
Pawz: .......still blobs.
Welp, I know what I'll be working on getting better at this chapter.
Anyways, enjoy!
Constructive criticism and comments are always appreciated!
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Aki: "What? Not going to let me talk about this page?"
Me: "Nahhh. You'll just criticize it a bit."
Aki: "Well I'm going to anyways. Why are you being so lazy about him, I mean, look at him; he's got no eyes. I thought you'd be better after 3 years."
Me: "To be fair he won't be coming up much, and I wanted him to look that way, so there."
Aki: "Just make sure you get better..."
Me: "I will, I will. Don't worry."
Heads/Faces: Better.
Bodies: Better.
Coloring: Better.
Text: Better.
Comic Boxes: Way Better
Pawz: .......still blobs.
Welp, I know what I'll be working on getting better at this chapter.
Anyways, enjoy!
Constructive criticism and comments are always appreciated!
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Aki: "What? Not going to let me talk about this page?"
Me: "Nahhh. You'll just criticize it a bit."
Aki: "Well I'm going to anyways. Why are you being so lazy about him, I mean, look at him; he's got no eyes. I thought you'd be better after 3 years."
Me: "To be fair he won't be coming up much, and I wanted him to look that way, so there."
Aki: "Just make sure you get better..."
Me: "I will, I will. Don't worry."
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Wolf
Size 1000 x 1600px
File Size 692.9 kB
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