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Short story I wrote to go along with the oc I made a little while back. it deatils the transforamtion process that she went through to become and illithid. It was semi inspired by the Xanadu shared setting on Shifti. I was a little to young to contribute to thta when it first appeared so here its basically a xanadu story many years later and in a differnt con.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Cephalopod
Size 93 x 120px
File Size 34.6 kB
again sorry for the slow response but your comment actually helped me get off my butt and finish off writing the second bit. here is a link to that! http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28017567/
Yoo I'll just reply to both of your comments on this one then, haha
But ayy I'm glad to hear it! I was just thinking of rereading this again too, what a fun coincidence! There's not enough illithid lit out there, so it's always a treat when i can find something nice :,<
but yooo that's perf, I just binged it, haha, I'm so happy you continued on with this \0/ <333 Def really enthused to find out what happens next, omggg
is there anywhere you're more active on that I could follow you at maybe? I def don't wanna miss any new chapters you put up!!!
But ayy I'm glad to hear it! I was just thinking of rereading this again too, what a fun coincidence! There's not enough illithid lit out there, so it's always a treat when i can find something nice :,<
but yooo that's perf, I just binged it, haha, I'm so happy you continued on with this \0/ <333 Def really enthused to find out what happens next, omggg
is there anywhere you're more active on that I could follow you at maybe? I def don't wanna miss any new chapters you put up!!!
no problem here is my tumblr where I'm far more active! https://www.tumblr.com/blog/marzipanrose I have a whole tag on here that contains snippets of the general story that I have planned out for izzie! just search izzie on my blog any youll see it. and I totally agree with you there is not enough illithid lit out there, ( although this blog is a pretty good illithid rp blog that's super fun to read through http://agengi.tumblr.com/)
This was a pretty good first half, though it probably could have used some proofreading, as there are some times where there isn't a space after a period, or when the tense switches from past to present. Still, the core idea is interesting (I've been a bit of a Xanadu fan myself, and even wrote a couple stories in that setting on other sites). The species choice can easily lead to a lot of complications, which I imagine are addressed in part two.
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