Lily In Her New Skin
Because I had to draw the post make over Lily! Well, not sort of this pic. I'll be making another version of it soon. ;3
How does she look fully drawn? I'd like some feedback as there can be some soft edits still done. Mostly looking at the face patterning.
Lily & Art © me
How does she look fully drawn? I'd like some feedback as there can be some soft edits still done. Mostly looking at the face patterning.
Lily & Art © me
Category All / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 2100 x 1080px
File Size 749.2 kB
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Cute, Chubby Cuddly and to the aliens plump, tender and juicy~ ^w^ *rubs her tummy and kneads her hips like I'm inspecting a rump roast* But I'm sure she can handle a few mean ol aliens~ ^w^ *wishes he was the lucky alien to nom her as she's just the right plumpess in all the right spots*
I don't necessarily think you need multiple layers of colors on her patterns, it would make her really complicated to do shading on. Maybe having more of a gradient or just removing the darker of the two colorations would be good I'd think. The patch near her nose looks good but I don't like the stuff behind her eyes and I don't think it adds anything of value to the rest of her.
I also think her tail is massive, like excessively so. It'd be quite weighty and hard to carry around if it was real. Having a tail that's more fluff than girth would nice, or just a smaller tail in general.
I don't mean to insult your design or anything she's quite cute, those are just the changes I would make if I was in charge of it.
I also think her tail is massive, like excessively so. It'd be quite weighty and hard to carry around if it was real. Having a tail that's more fluff than girth would nice, or just a smaller tail in general.
I don't mean to insult your design or anything she's quite cute, those are just the changes I would make if I was in charge of it.
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