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no title in my mind yet just a prototype so be polite pls
never bully a furry, you might regret it
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 17.6 kB
Just a fair and good point of critique is to use some tags in your stories. Also use paragraphs to finished thought, yours are a bit too short. I would use also paragraph space to space the paragraphs for better readability.
It is otherwise nice to read story, just a bit too hard. And welcome new writer.
It is otherwise nice to read story, just a bit too hard. And welcome new writer.
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