Well.....first, horribly destroyed story. Hope it doesn't burn anyone's eyes too much. Just comment if you think it's alright! :)
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 39.5 kB
That's actually not as bad as you make it out to be. Admittedly your resolution was a little sudden; you could have drawn it out by shifting his emotions a few times before he gave in to her. But really it looks like a good enough first draft to something bigger. I hope you keep working.
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