I love the rhyme you went with.. It sort of has a very minor jazzy feel to it.. because of the pause and then it picks back up again. I definitely feel like your mixing with his is quite better he sounds less muddy and like he has more presence, it gives him a much more human feel I believe. I aren't sure if this is the case, but I like some of the after breaths you came up with for him like at.. 1:31. I dunno it's quite naturally sounding at least to me. I definitely think you're very experimental with the rhyme in particular on this one, I aren't sure if that was your focus, but it seems like you use a lot of slowing and speeding up of the rhyme in this. Also are these songs part of a series.. because they have a lot of similarities, while still having their own identity, this definitely sounds more up beat compared to mold, but instead of being more deep rooted it sounds more like a lot of insecurities and self doubt. Which actually goes hand in hand with some of your other works. It's really good and it's definitely something I can say I've dealt with and still deal with. Even if that wasn't your intent, it's good that it can be interpreted in different ways.

thanks so much <3 i'm glad you like it~
I guess they kind of actually //are// part of a series.
A lot of them have to do with some shitty experiences i've had with a guy haha
i could give you all the backstory in skype or something~

Aww cool, well I mean intentional or not it sounds the part 'w'
Oh god.. I just hear one of these and just get all on edge xD
Sure if you'd like I mean as long as you're comfortable.