i like it

:3 figured you might.

Very cool. I really need to learn how to write more like this.

^.=.^ *blush* Awwww...

Magnificent.
It is quite a mystery to me how this is created in English, in my language it seems easier, but those rules do not apply to any foreign poems.
What I want to say is that you never cease to amaze me with these verses.
Bravo. n .n

^.=.^ Why thank you. That's one of the things I love about poetry, it's totally unbound by any rules. I mean you can make it adhere to certain forms if you like, and you think it fits the mood, but all rules are optional. Even grammatical ones.

What is your native language, may I ask?

Sure you can, it's Hungarian. n .n
And I agree with you for the most part. After all in order to make it a poem t has to fit under the definition of it.

...? not even. there is no REAL definition of a poem, and anyone that tries to define it is missing the point

Well, actually as I see it there are many types of poems, as in sort of subgenres. Which result in many forms to it, and many rules. for example in an Elegia - do not ask for the english version of the word, I have no idea, and elegia revolves around a sad feeling - you don't usually have too many playful rhymes, but slow and bitter ones with a gloomy, melancholic feel(not to mention it is usually written in distichons). Poems like that are elegias.

Well, actually as I see it there are many types of poems, as in sort of subgenres. Which result in many forms to it, and many rules. for example in an Elegia - do not ask for the english version of the word, I have no idea, and elegia revolves around a sad feeling - you don't usually have too many playful rhymes, but slow and bitter ones with a gloomy, melancholic feel(not to mention it is usually written in distichons). Poems like that are elegias.

For some arcane reason this is a double post... Sorry. O .o

For some arcane reason this is a double post... Sorry. O .o