Hmmmm... the chord progression with the acoustic guitar I love, but the synth (I think) that appears 29 seconds in just seems... off.

I dunno, sometimes it's fine, but for the most part, it just distracts me and stops me from listening to the rest of the song.

way too repetitive for me, honestly. I couldn't get past three and a half minutes.

I plan on fixing/adding a little more later. I wanted to do more with the guitar lead, but at the time, out of what I came up with, this was the only thing that worked well. Meh, a good start at least. :P

True, it is a good start. I really like the acoustic guitar.

awessssssoooooooome!
its very catchy!
good luck with yer adjustments!
i might make the vocoder a little louder <3

Yo dude! As a newb, I'm not sure how much a critique from me can help you... but, if seriously asked, I'm always willing to throw out ideas and see if they do any good/make any cool, creative sparks. Just hope you like visual references/explanations, cause I never learned the lingo. ;)

I really do dig the concepts swimming around in this one. I agree that the intro could be condensed a bit, but I hear promise in the synth... mebbe if it had another growly/gruff-sounding instrument to balance it against the thinner/smoother sounding ones?? A dirtier bass/harmony might help there... or just a quicker/quirkier bass beat to bounce off the synth's natural beat? *ponders* It would give something else for the listener to focus on too, and not get lost in the repetition. You can have one beat through an entire tune, as long as you keep the listener's attention elsewhere... like slight-of-hand, but for the ear.

The guitar's tune is sweeet, but feels weak in places... either too distant/quiet or too... I dunno... thin. I almost want a real quiet synth or orchestra line to harmonize with it a little, and give it some richness/standing/power. Having the vocoder voice float low around in there a bit earlier might be a way to add some dimensionality to it... and make the voice seem more a part of the entire piece, and more than just a closing.

Can't wait to hear what you do with it next!

SO reminds me of a kinda Stone Temple Pilots vibe here. And I loved STP... And this is decent stuff 8=)

Great tune to have in the background while doing other stuff