sorry I haven't uploaded in forever ?
I'm actually proud of this lol
/also if someone can id like to hear a critique on this lol ? ;w;/
I'm actually proud of this lol
/also if someone can id like to hear a critique on this lol ? ;w;/
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If you want a critique about good and bad. I think i can spot and notice some things.
Your line work is absolutely beautiful. Fits very well with your style.
The coloring is really well done. The textures, blends and highlights are gorgeous! Especially the sparkles really pretty.
But, theres a few things that I noticed.
First thing I've noticed is the the bow and the torso. The way its angled is confusing in my opinion. You can see the bowtie angle, but you can't see what actual angle the torso is. what creates the oddity of the torso is the breast. The length and size nearly passes the dimensions of the bowtie.
I'm no boob expert.. So I can be mistaken.
Other thing I seen is the line work above the left knee. The line is really thick and connects with the breast.
Last thing, Is the left boot is bigger than the other one. You can see the right boot is thin, and bends how its suppose too.
As for the left one, it looks thicker.
Aside that, this is a really incredible piece for your character. The colors bloom, the eyes are adorable and the boots are awesome.
I hope this doesn't bother you. This is s really great piece^^ its soo unique.
Your line work is absolutely beautiful. Fits very well with your style.
The coloring is really well done. The textures, blends and highlights are gorgeous! Especially the sparkles really pretty.
But, theres a few things that I noticed.
First thing I've noticed is the the bow and the torso. The way its angled is confusing in my opinion. You can see the bowtie angle, but you can't see what actual angle the torso is. what creates the oddity of the torso is the breast. The length and size nearly passes the dimensions of the bowtie.
I'm no boob expert.. So I can be mistaken.
Other thing I seen is the line work above the left knee. The line is really thick and connects with the breast.
Last thing, Is the left boot is bigger than the other one. You can see the right boot is thin, and bends how its suppose too.
As for the left one, it looks thicker.
Aside that, this is a really incredible piece for your character. The colors bloom, the eyes are adorable and the boots are awesome.
I hope this doesn't bother you. This is s really great piece^^ its soo unique.
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