Ah, another good poem by you and this one is rather nice.

8D

Why THANK you Crystal! =3

I really appreciate you taking the time to read my work! \(^o^)/

You're welcome and not a problem :)

Oh, this is very nice.

And I see you did with "emerald" what I suggested with "violet".

Lovely imagery. Excellent rhyming.

My only questionable moment was "tinted rinse". Not sure what you meant by that.

Hehe, THANKS, for both the help AND comment! \(^o^).

And trust me, you're probably not the ONLY one to question the meaning of "tinted rinse." =P


It was a tough rhyme to deal with because of the usage of "innocence"; however, I REFUSED to drop that word. (too good) =/

So, I managed to use the definition of "rinse" that pertains to the water/preparation used for "tinting" hair; though, in this case, "tinting" the wings of a butterfly. I know, it's kinda of a stretch, BUT, I hopefully with that explanation, it's somewhat justified! x3

Once again, thanks man! ;3

Absolutely SPECTACULAR! n_n

Imagery, it certainly puts a new perspective on things without visual representation.

But this is truthfully AMAZING, great job. *hugs tight* :3

I gots a HUG!! 8D

*frolicks about fervently*

Heehee, well I'm glad you liked it! ^^

I simply CAN'T let up on the imagery; it's my FAVORITE and probably most POWERFUL tool in mah arsenal! D:

*hugs back* x3

Wonderfully beautiful, you have a great imagination and great sensitivity to use words, every phrase conjures a beautiful image, congratulations ^_^

Oh THANK you Anhes! \(^o^)/

I'm really glad you like my work. ^^

And my imagination is one of things I cherish MOST about myself! =O

*hugs* x3

Your poem idea has inspired my own creativity. I enjoy a good challenge now and again, and I challenge now my self to a duel with you. I too have written a butterfly poem. Now being that I am not as popular a poet as you I expect not so many faves as 5 but I would at least like your input.

I wouldn't say I'm THAT popular! D:

But thank you for the kinds words Deth! :>

I haven't heard from you in QUITE some time. I hope you're doing well! =D

*hugs* ^^

Well, let's see whatcha got! ;3

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2359046

I look forward to your thoughts x3

Woah. Well, you certainly don't dissapoint!

x3

Yeah, to be honest, this is most DEFINITELY one of my FAVES! =P

PURE SIMPLICITY; yet, so much to say! =O

Thanks again Joe; I'm glad you're enjoying my work thus far! ^^