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You wanted it. You got it. Look it. Love it.
Chubeko looks good nice and heavy. I imagine it many times and felt it was about time she was drawn.
Tell me what you think. What you like about it? How you feel? Your opinions about the appeal here. Pretty much anything! I desire comments. =3 Thank you.
Chubeko looks good nice and heavy. I imagine it many times and felt it was about time she was drawn.
Tell me what you think. What you like about it? How you feel? Your opinions about the appeal here. Pretty much anything! I desire comments. =3 Thank you.
Category All / Fat Furs
Species Vulpine (Other)
Size 1280 x 1166px
File Size 966.3 kB
Hmmmm. Not too bad. It looks very nice.
The Good:
I like how you drew her size. It's very large but it also seems very believable. How you did the rolls of fat really adds to the overall look. The outfit also looks cute and I can tell you put quite a bit of effort into drawing it, especially with the pants. The hair is also a nice touch and I think it helps her look more attractive and the same can be said for her facial expression.
The Not So Good:
The breasts look slightly off. Both in shape and in proximity. If you used tilted ovals instead of circles and spaced them slightly more apart, then I think the breasts would look more like they were resting on her massive belly instead of "just being there".
The Unique:
The background works very well but I don't know why. Also she looks very tall which by the way, isn't a bad thing.
On the whole, I think you did a really good job on this and I think it would be nice to see more pics of her in this shape. So overall, great job.
The Good:
I like how you drew her size. It's very large but it also seems very believable. How you did the rolls of fat really adds to the overall look. The outfit also looks cute and I can tell you put quite a bit of effort into drawing it, especially with the pants. The hair is also a nice touch and I think it helps her look more attractive and the same can be said for her facial expression.
The Not So Good:
The breasts look slightly off. Both in shape and in proximity. If you used tilted ovals instead of circles and spaced them slightly more apart, then I think the breasts would look more like they were resting on her massive belly instead of "just being there".
The Unique:
The background works very well but I don't know why. Also she looks very tall which by the way, isn't a bad thing.
On the whole, I think you did a really good job on this and I think it would be nice to see more pics of her in this shape. So overall, great job.
Thank you so very much on the critique. the background is a contrast of the dominant color, orange, so it makes the pic in general look good. And when I thought of green and tubby Chubeko i could only feel Chocolate Mints.
The breasts are the only thing I didn't to mess up too much on. i may try alterations. Maybe.
The breasts are the only thing I didn't to mess up too much on. i may try alterations. Maybe.
Your welcome. Also, I can see what you mean by the contrasts between the orange and the green. If you used a blue background, that might of worked too, what with blue being the compliment to orange on the color wheel. Maybe Blue Raspberry bubblegum?
Oh, and with the breasts, you can kinda see what I'm talking about here: ( http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2081529/ ). That is, incase you were considering trying out my previous suggestion.
Anyway, I sincerely hope you find what I have to say useful. You're a very talented artist and I look forward to seeing more of your work later in the future.
Oh, and with the breasts, you can kinda see what I'm talking about here: ( http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2081529/ ). That is, incase you were considering trying out my previous suggestion.
Anyway, I sincerely hope you find what I have to say useful. You're a very talented artist and I look forward to seeing more of your work later in the future.
Oh wow, seeing a plus-sized you is nice to see. I'm lovign how tightly those jeans are hugging those massive hips and thighs, and the way your shirt ended up as a neckline bra that's barely containing your chest...
The breasts need to be a bit more ovalish though, and they look they scruntched up at the right side of your chest. However, I won't be terribly picky you too much as this is particularly a new style for you and I'm sure you'll get used to drawing it in MSPaint in no time.
The breasts need to be a bit more ovalish though, and they look they scruntched up at the right side of your chest. However, I won't be terribly picky you too much as this is particularly a new style for you and I'm sure you'll get used to drawing it in MSPaint in no time.
Well, do YOU like it?
How does it make YOU feel?
What appeal were YOU going for?
As myself, I enjoy it. It gives off a rather strange feeling however, a feeling of being minuscule compared to larger things. Her size (of course), her pose, and the look on her face all contribute to this. To this extent, I place it as a feel of submission, or an appeal to dominance. Mind you, this dominance is not extreme, it is more like the dominance given from an older sibling or from a leading friend.
How does it make YOU feel?
What appeal were YOU going for?
As myself, I enjoy it. It gives off a rather strange feeling however, a feeling of being minuscule compared to larger things. Her size (of course), her pose, and the look on her face all contribute to this. To this extent, I place it as a feel of submission, or an appeal to dominance. Mind you, this dominance is not extreme, it is more like the dominance given from an older sibling or from a leading friend.
I really like the body shape to this one. It makes her look a lot heavier than before. The hair and clothes are also a really nice touch, as it gives her a good bit more character. I do have to agree with the above comment, though. If I were to criticize, I'd say the breasts are a little close together, especially when you consider how wide her body really is. It might be worth trying to put some space between them.
But, all in all, I think this is a nice look for her.
But, all in all, I think this is a nice look for her.
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