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"Death and decay run through my veins...I won't waste this gift."
Carraj was once a proud member of his home town and an apprentice of one of the highest scolar. Yet one day he killed his teacher in a tragic accident. Sadly the laws of the town were strict and whoever would break the law of murder would be cursed with death and cast out of the city to die alone in the wilds. And his name would carry the affix 'Lys' (murderer) forever in the records.
None ever dared to imagine someone might be able to take advantage of the curse...a fatal mistake.
Yeah another planeswalker, and now my inspiration was indeed Delirium, while my previous planeswalker ( http://www.furaffinity.net/view/23231774/ ) was more orientated towards madness.
Also I thought we lack Black/Green planeswalker just as much, since I can't recall any besides Vraska, who is...meh, in my opinion at least.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy my accursed elf.
helped me with the basic idea of the setting btw.
As always comments and critiques are highly appreciated, my it be referring his abilities or the setting and character design.
And of course the pic will be uploaded soon as well.
Carraj was once a proud member of his home town and an apprentice of one of the highest scolar. Yet one day he killed his teacher in a tragic accident. Sadly the laws of the town were strict and whoever would break the law of murder would be cursed with death and cast out of the city to die alone in the wilds. And his name would carry the affix 'Lys' (murderer) forever in the records.
None ever dared to imagine someone might be able to take advantage of the curse...a fatal mistake.
Yeah another planeswalker, and now my inspiration was indeed Delirium, while my previous planeswalker ( http://www.furaffinity.net/view/23231774/ ) was more orientated towards madness.
Also I thought we lack Black/Green planeswalker just as much, since I can't recall any besides Vraska, who is...meh, in my opinion at least.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy my accursed elf.
helped me with the basic idea of the setting btw.As always comments and critiques are highly appreciated, my it be referring his abilities or the setting and character design.
And of course the pic will be uploaded soon as well.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fanart
Species Elf
Size 465 x 650px
File Size 413.5 kB
Listed in Folders
Hey, for once I am actually fine with your card! ;)
You just have to change the wording of the first ability. WotC usually writes it like this: "Look at the top three cards of your library. Put one of them into your hand and the rest into your graveyard."
If you consider that you can bring back the creature killed by the ultimate in the same turn, you have to change the wording.
When you use the ability you have to choose the targets at the same time, when you choose the target you want to kill, it is not in the graveyard yet and can't be targeted by the planeswalker. Also if the opponent doesn't have a dead creature, you can't use the ability at all, because you can't choose both targets.
"Destroy target creature. Then return a creature from a graveyard to the battlefield under your control." would fix it.
And they told me becoming a Rules Advisor is useless! :D
edit: Almost forgot saying that: Setting and art is really fitting here. Looks good!
You just have to change the wording of the first ability. WotC usually writes it like this: "Look at the top three cards of your library. Put one of them into your hand and the rest into your graveyard."
If you consider that you can bring back the creature killed by the ultimate in the same turn, you have to change the wording.
When you use the ability you have to choose the targets at the same time, when you choose the target you want to kill, it is not in the graveyard yet and can't be targeted by the planeswalker. Also if the opponent doesn't have a dead creature, you can't use the ability at all, because you can't choose both targets.
"Destroy target creature. Then return a creature from a graveyard to the battlefield under your control." would fix it.
And they told me becoming a Rules Advisor is useless! :D
edit: Almost forgot saying that: Setting and art is really fitting here. Looks good!
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