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You know how in every Kingdom Hearts game they have some sort of poem for it? Well, if I'm doing a Kingdom Hearts-based comic, I should have something similar I think. :P This was fun to do, but I still have a lot to learn with Sai Painter I think. I dunno what it was (maybe cause it was so late when I drew this), but I feel like things don't look exactly right with FW. Ah well. :)
EDIT: Better poem this time? I dunno, lol.
Hold me, whatever lies beyond this morning,
Is a little later on.
Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all~
Nothing's like before!
EDIT: Better poem this time? I dunno, lol.
Hold me, whatever lies beyond this morning,
Is a little later on.
Regardless of warnings the future doesn't scare me at all~
Nothing's like before!
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Haha, yes, someone actually realizes that. XD I'll say that FW keeps his glasses on by magic anyway. They're usually just sitting across his nose not actually connected to his head in any way, so that's the only way he could keep them on. Besides having very good balance I guess, that'd probably help.
I think I've written only a couple poems in my whole life, so I'll be the first to admit that I don't have a clue what I'm doing, lol.
So...Expressing the tone? And...word placement and words that don't really have the same meaning but do? I'm not even sure I get that. D: I'll try again with writing one though, and see if it turns out any better. I'll leave it as is for now.
So...Expressing the tone? And...word placement and words that don't really have the same meaning but do? I'm not even sure I get that. D: I'll try again with writing one though, and see if it turns out any better. I'll leave it as is for now.
I noticed how you twisted the grammar a bit, so you have the basic concept. Though by widening your word choice, you can allow the reader's understanding to drift.
So I recommend using words that meant something, but then again meant something else. The words you used are confined, to my view at least.
So I recommend using words that meant something, but then again meant something else. The words you used are confined, to my view at least.
Awww, I think you should though! Especially if you've got it all worked out and everything, I think it'd be great if you put it up. :) I know this story is probably going to be pretty long too, I've already planned out like 5 or so chapters, and I'm not even sure how many pages each one will be, lol.
As said before, totally looking forward to it =3
And maybe we can arrange a kind of character trade, since I need still more other characters that might show up on other worlds (my one probably has a bunch of folks here from FA) ;3
*hopes that I write it right, sometimes my english sucks@.@
And maybe we can arrange a kind of character trade, since I need still more other characters that might show up on other worlds (my one probably has a bunch of folks here from FA) ;3
*hopes that I write it right, sometimes my english sucks@.@
*plays passion after intro* Haha.. this makes me want to something like that! Awesom job!
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If you like Kingdom Hearts, click this link http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2303345
Normally I'd roll my eyes and go "Another Kingdom Hearts fanfic?" Buuut since you've already established yourself as an excellent storyteller and artist, I think I can make an exception in your case! X3 I'm sure it'll be wonderful! I'm assuming, then, that FW will be the "hero" of sorts? Since you seem to be implying that it's not really a fan-fiction. x3 Either way, looking forward to it greatly! I'm a huge fan of KH. :3
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