Commission for
Mephistan
Mephistan
Category Artwork (Digital) / Human
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 600px
File Size 78 kB
Gorgeous, but...he might consider getting a smaller undershirt(I think that's what the proper name of that is, the only other name I have for it is a "beater")...it looks a little loose. But then, we wouldn't be able to see the chest so well...catch 22. Then again, a skin tight undershirt on a big guy like him...would not leave me disappointed.
I'm gonna critique this if you don't mind! The background appears to be disproportioned. The bottles in the foreground aren't very convincing . . . it seems like the guy in the alleyway is a large photograph that someone placed bottles in front of, rather than the bottles being part of the alleyway. I also don't get the feeling that the ground is level . . . I get the sense that the trash can and the trash bag are either hovering a bit off the ground, or the ground is sloping slightly down toward us. And the wall appears to be curving . . . and to make sure it wasn't just me I lined up a pencil with the bottom of the wall and it's not straight.
I do know that it's an old image but I still felt compelled to write up a little constructive criticism. Honestly I did this for my own benefit as much as I wanted to do it for yours since I'm taking an art class as an elective where oral critiques are required and it's very helpful to spot these things. And I remember you running that Hurt Me group, so you're pretty much the only artist around here who I'm confident won't bite my head off for doing this and I promise it won't be often at all.
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