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Power Krunch


within the large apartment the only sounds were rhythmic counting and the clinking of exercise equipment. The muscular lion was just finishing his last few reps of his intense workout. His name was L`arc and he took great pride in his body. His pecs were huge, his abs chiseled and his limbs bursting with muscle.

His main instead of being the usual light brown was a very dark brown with green highlights through it. Finishing up he put down the weights and sighed happily. “nothing like a morning workout” he said taking a swig of water. L`ark had dedicated a section of his apartment to gym equipment. 

The nearest gym was a 30 minute drive so he thought it would be easier to work out at home. L`ark wiped off his equipment and went for a quick shower. As he walked in he got a good look at himself in the mirror. Of coarse he was proud of the mass he has put on so far but sadly he wanted to be bigger. He tried supplements but it never worked out. He quickly took his shower then made himself a quick salad to munch on while watching tv. As he was watching he saw a very interesting ad. “hey you” a cartoon dog screamed in usual ad fashion. “you topped out on the scales? Hit your peak of mass? Well we have the solution for you!”. The dog held up a bar, “try our new Power Krunch Bars! There a sure way to put more mass on you!”. The commercial kept going like this as the dog would fly over people sprinkling these bars down watching them be replaced by body builders

. L`ark rubbed his mane “hmm I wonder if those would do the trick”, he thought openly to himself. He kept thinking about it as he finished off his salad then stood up suddenly. “maybe this is it!” he said to himself before grabbing his keys and heading out the door. He drove his truck to the nearby super market and took a look around. Finally finding a big display for the new fitness snack. L`ark looked over the wrapper, “unlock your full potential with this energizing snack..”. He grabbed one to take home for his next work out.

The next day L`ark get everything ready. He had his towel and a water bottle and his new energy bar. He gave it one final skeptical look before unwrapping it. It was a light brown color and the surface of it looked like it was covered in corn flakes. Sniffing it he smelled something like apples. Finally taking a skeptical bite the flavor exploded in his mouth. The outside was fantastically crunchy but the inside was super soft. Chewing it around he gave a light moan at the intense flavor. He quickly finished the bar before he felt something. Like a hot wash of energy filled his body. 

He quickly grabbed the weights and started furiously pumping iron. In only 30 short minutes he finished his whole routine and he was still going. He felt amazing even after he got up. He felt his muscles twitching with excitement. But after another 10 minutes he started to cool off finally as the bar did its magic. He panted heavily feeling the strain he put on himself. Casually wiping off the equipment he went into the bathroom to shower off.

But he looked at the mirror again and stopped. It was very slight but he was definitely bigger. His shirt looked just a little more strained and his arms just a little bit bigger. He did a little dance, “woohoo!”after his shower he grabbed his keys running back to the store to get more power bars.




Next several work outs went the same. Eat bar, power through work out, get a little bigger. But as he kept going he started to notice something a little odd. First off the bars were not lasting as long as they did the first time and he was losing definition. The chiseled perfection of his muscles began to soften bit by bit and he started getting a little bit of a belly. He rubbed the very slight paunch. “hmm maybe im not working out enough...” L`arc thought to himself.

Then he came up with an idea. If he ate one bar and it gave him that much energy then if he ate 2 he could work out for twice as long! L`arc grabbed 2 bars shoving them in his mouth as he felt a rush of energy like never before. He furiously worked out like a madman. Some people would say the pace he was going was dangerous but he couldn't stop himself. After an hour he stopped dripping heavily in sweat completely destroyed by his work out. He dragged himself into the bathroom and looked himself over. He definitely got some of his definition back as his arms were getting really buff, he could see his abs again and his pecks were stretching his shirt.

He looked over himself again in excitement. Little did L`arc know he made one fatal mistake at not reading the wrapper more closely. You see even after the initial effects wear off the bar is still digesting in you for about a 2 hour period. Because he didnt pace himself he gains the mass but he is also storing that unspent energy as calories, and now that he is increasing his intake it might have some unintended results...


2 weeks later

the alarm on his clock buzzed as a heavy hand clicked it off. The lion grunted as he pulled off the covers. He got up looking in his bedroom mirror. His muscles were as big as ever but something was catching up. His once minor pot belly was now a full blown gut. The heavy caramel sphere was folding over his waist band. He rubbed it a bit. But it was the weirdest thing, L`ark would usually feel disgusted in himself but he kind of liked it. 

Its not like he wasn't buff but he liked how soft it was. He looked at himself again. “i definitely give off a stronger prescience then I did before, more commanding” he said to his reflection. He left his bedroom looking over his workout equipment with a little bit of a sigh. The bars didn't give him the same feeling as they did before.

“i kinda, don't feel like working out today..” he said to himself. The lion sat down and turned on the tv. Immediately he saw an ad for the bars and his belly began to gurgle. “you know maybe I can have just one...” he said. Biting into one he sat on the couch munching and watching tv for most of the day.


1 week later

the alarm buzzed again and a fat paw came out form under the covers and batted at it. Grunting he got out of bed as the bed creaked heavily under him. Getting up he looked himself over again but he had changed completely in the last week. Eating the bars without working out had lead to disastrous effects. His belly drooped down to his thighs and extended out a good foot. He had fat moobs that rested on his big belly, his butt became quite big as it swallowed a little of his tail. He still had a lot of his muscle but it was all covered with a generous layer of fat. He grabbed a bar from his night stand and walked into his living room. 

All his gym equipment has gone unused in the past week and managed to get a little dusty. Not thinking much of it he padded his way into his living room and plopped down on the couch again. Surrounding him were bar wrappers and huge boxes of power crunch bars. He unwrapped another and munched on it. He looked down giving his belly a slap.

Over the week he had found a lot of enjoyment in playing with his new fat. He gave it a grope and a feel and he loved it. His stretched skin was so sensitive that all the rubbing felt really good. He slapped his belly again watching the huge heavy sphere of fat wobble around. He opened another case of bars as he looked at the tv. It was a new ad for the bars introducing a new flavor. L`arcs mouth water as he reached for his phone. “hey buddy its me... yea I need more... you see the new flavor? Good ill need 4 cases of those... alright... see you tomorrow click”

L`ark kept munching on those bars looking himself over. Working out was so over rated. Im getting so much bigger so easily! And im only a week in, I wonder where ill be in a month...
the last thought made L`arks mouth to water as he dug into more bars clearly excited about the future

the end