Pretty good, although the vocaloid is kinda unfitting

^ Bell end.. anyway... xD

I love how crisp the guitar sounds in this.. I also like how whenever you get him to pronounce something it has a nice click to it.. it really compliments the tingy clear sound of the guitar. I also like how the drums are more mellowed, they're there and represent the rhyme, but also keep the focus on the front which for me at least was the vocals and guitar. I also like how you got his lower tones to sound so complete.. one thing I don't like when male Vocaloids or even female Vocaloids go low.. is when they have that empty drone sound.. or a rattle.. but he actually has minimal of that.. at least when you use him.. I really like the vibrato you did on.. "wasting my breath" because of him coming from low.. and raising it has a very classic rock sound to it. I think tonally everything in this really works together. You definitely did the mixing justice, really good job ;w; and good use of clear and consistent English!