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The page layout is quite good. You made it flow really well
The second frame is damn great. Good drawing and composition and emotion and etc.
Keep going, goddammit. D: *hug*
Also, only kind of pretentious. xP Although I think editing/revision would fix that, it's cool as it is, just keep going. xP
The second frame is damn great. Good drawing and composition and emotion and etc.
Keep going, goddammit. D: *hug*
Also, only kind of pretentious. xP Although I think editing/revision would fix that, it's cool as it is, just keep going. xP
The narration here would probably seem okay in the long run, with more stuff along with it, but in comparison to the silent page before and nothing after as of yet it's just suddenly almost trying too hard at some kind of morose profundity. But it is still okay.
I dunno, that probably didn't help/made no sense or something. XP
I dunno, that probably didn't help/made no sense or something. XP
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