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Finally I finished it! :D
Meet Fred, my OC! Hope you like him! :)
If you noticed any language mistakes, please let me know! I'll be gratefull! :)
Meet Fred, my OC! Hope you like him! :)
If you noticed any language mistakes, please let me know! I'll be gratefull! :)
Category Artwork (Digital) / Animal related (non-anthro)
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 1516 x 1290px
File Size 1.7 MB
I was wondering when there was going to be more art. It turns out that was now. :3
Looking at the language, I do see a few things that could be better. For instance, more than one fish is still "fish", that is the plural form. Also, "he never touches the carrion" looks strange. I would just write "never touches carrion", that is, leaving out "the" in the part about what he doesn't eat.
Looking at the language, I do see a few things that could be better. For instance, more than one fish is still "fish", that is the plural form. Also, "he never touches the carrion" looks strange. I would just write "never touches carrion", that is, leaving out "the" in the part about what he doesn't eat.
Hmm, there's also a mistake with the order of "likes also" under "other facts", in English "also" comes before the verb. Additionally, in "the tail also serves a huge role while the pursuit" can look better if you rewrite it to read "while in a pursuit" or "while chasing down prey".
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