Good job on this! Interesting species too

Aw thanks, I love birdwatching so it's fun tossing in a few details along those lines even if it doesn't mean much to the story

Thank you so much again. It definitely shows how much detail you appreciate when becoming a bird.

You're very welcome, and you can be sure that there will be even more to come!

Haven't seen you post anything in ages, so it's nice to see this. Reminds me of your blue jay story from years ago.

I feel flattered that you noticed that, thank you. It's actually an intentional callback as the commissioner was wanting something similar to that original story. I was happy to oblige since I had a lot of fun with the first one and I wanted to test how my writing has progressed. Either way, thanks for the inspiring comment

Always love your stories~! It's pretty rare to see good TF written in the second person perspective... heck, it's hard to find good ANYTHING written like that. And the birdiness is icing on the cake. :D

Aw thank you! I'm going to blush. I'm glad that you enjoy the second person perspective, I really like the feeling of connection that it gives to the reader when it's depicting something I know they want to have happen to them ;)

Also I am happy to say that there is a lot more of it on the way!

It really does! As someone who'd embody that statement, I can say for sure, haha. Really is an underused element in story writing, so I very much forward to whatever you're planning for the future~! Probably more birds, I imagine? ;)

We can always use more birds!

Birds are always welcome. Before I forget, I posted transformation sequence I commissioned you may be interested in of a character based on my dragon-self becoming a tengu with some eagle features on my Fur Affinity page.

Oh yes I've seen that one. And tengu are so great! One of my favourite roleplay characters was a Tengu bard named Ezra, she was a free spirited traveler with some awkward family issues. Quirky avian mindsets are so fun to explore.

I love Tengu as ravens are one of my favorite birds. I have a Tengu Hexcrafter Magus, sort of a fighter, witch and wizard combination I enjoy playing. I even caw and click when I play him. Technically, he is considered a high elf from Silverymoon for game mechanics because the DM wanted to stick with core races but let me make him look like a Tengu. I created a back-story that he was an elf who was cursed by a druid for figuring out and teaching the secret language of druids. The druid cursed him so that each time he spread the secret language he would become more and more like a creature fitting of him. Something clever, defiant and a bit chatty, a raven. He kind of blew the entire curse thing off as a bunch of talk and continued teaching anyone who wished to learn. Nothing seemed to happen at first but after a while, he got hit with the effects of the curse all at once to go through a painful transformation into an avian being. He has not shared the secrets of the druidic language ever since for fear things might get worse.

Wonderful story. I enjoyed the perspective of "being there." I closed my eyes a couple of times to better imagine the scene, the raven and the transformation. This may have been the first Steller's sea eagle transformation I came across. They are such lovely birds. I believe I recall the same feathered friend in another story involving a blue jay transformation.

Thank you for your thoughtful comment! Kirkrapine is actually my first real fursona (though not my first "furry" character) but I softened him a bit to have him match my current mood.

I'm very glad that you enjoy the species and setting. To think that you closed your eyes to imagine is a high compliment to me!

You are very welcome. You write some very wonderful transformation stories. I should commission you to write a human-sized harpy eagle transformation story some time. I guess you could say that the large harpy eagle was my first spiritual form back when I was first getting into shamanism and some Pagan traditions in high school.

If you're still interested later just let me know, I'll be opening for more stories in the coming days and weeks. Avians are always fun to write. Thank you for your interest :)

You are very welcome.

I'd just like to say this was a very enjoyable read! It's well written, everything flows nicely and the way you describe the sequence itself is very appealing. Choosing to write in second person makes the experience much more personal for the reader :>

I've always enjoyed transformation stories and yours ticks all of the right boxes. Thank you for writing this.

Thank you for your kind comment. That's exactly the reason that I prefer to write in second person, telling the sorts of scenes that make you want to close your eyes for a bit and just imagine them. Maybe it deepens the experience, feeling it happening to you rather than witnessing it happening to someone else. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

I love this bird, where is he?

really good Transformation story, it´s extremely difficult to find a bird tf, also one that isn´t anthro and also good.