Good job! Wasn't expecting to find a Vocaloid song on the front page, heheh.

thanks lmao
glad you liked it~

I really like how you EQ.. you make things like S's sound nice and coherent and have a nice slice to them, the same with the T's too.. it sounds good 1:45.. I like the effect you put on the harmonies it gave it a cool cool unworldly sound. In my head.. hearing this song.. I imagine an abandoned.. house in the woods.. in late fall/early winter.. when there's no snow.. but all the tears are bare.. and the atmosphere is.. some what fogged.. and the sky blends with the ground almost.., in any case this sounds very neat I really like the instrumental break later on at.. around 2:20, it really evolves and I liked all your piano melodies you came up with... I think when you had the violins and the focus on that and the drums.. It set the mood in a somewhat contemplative place.. where you were taking in what had been said.. You're really creative with the vocal melodies too.. you managed to make everything thing dark and helpless.. and I think you achieve that.. by having any up inflections are the beginning.. of the verse and chorus.. rather then having it the end that.. would perhaps make it seem more hopeful.. I really like how much you played on the atmosphere and world building in the song. The lyrics reminded me of content from something like.. silence of the lambs.. or something.. I dunno.. I do like it though, it's vivid.. and definitely plays on a lot of imagery through sound.. like the comparisons with the mold.. and the reference to rotten food, it could be a lot of those.. elude to death.. but I either way I'm not sure.. either way it's certainly super expressive..

thank you so much <3 I'm so happy you like it
I really did try to go for some world building with this and i'm really glad you were able to pick up on it!

Perfect I am glad you were able to do that : ) keep up the good work.