Hehe, I think she sounds like a neat addition to the story. (:
And I like one particular thing about her that's different from other heros I've read about.
She wanted to fight for equality and changing people's lives and everything, and she got bored with just serving a high rank, and wanted to set out and do as she'd done her whole life.
I think I remember StarFox doing something similar in one of his games, but I'm not sure if everyone else I read about does that. I'd say maybe Link from Zelda, but I could be wrong too... so instead I'll just leave it open-ended. I'm sure she'll be a great help!

Yup, yup! Oh, and many thanks for enduring a Page 2. I was scared to go over a single page. However, I couldn't develop her back-story and bring her into the current without all the information I provided. *sigh* Next one will be back to super-easy read, though. *cush-cush* I hope. ;)

I think you are right about Fox and friends, too on Star Fox. The ending of Star Fox 64, and this is vague for me now, had a scene where General Pepper offered the team some sort of deal and, well, they humbly turned it down to live as rogues.

The Link from "Ocarina of Time" is the same way, too. He opts to leave Hyrule for adventure and winds up in Termina. I think the Link from "A Link to the Past" does this, too, when he moves onto "Link's Awakening." The only Link that doesn't move on, actually, is the one that ends the series from the original, NES games. He is all about Zelda and Hyrule.

Hmm.

No problem! :3 Actually, I didn't notice that at first. 8D I saw the links to three images, but I only saw two on the first page, and it sounded like it was a complete story despite her not being in the Further Realms yet... but then I read through! It's so cool how you related it to one of the earliest (maybe even the first?) Further Realms stories I read. :3 It's fun how these things are connecting!

Ah, around the beginning of the Majora's Mask manga, Link was setting out to be a knight in Hyrule, but then he sets out for his friend and finds a whole other adventure! :3 I wish I could play the old NES one now!

Oopa! One of my favorite things as a writer, or a viewer of arts, is seeing "intertwining events." I think it is just too thrilling when something pops up out of nowhere that relates back to something cool from the past. It's even better when you can see / create a quality "cross-over" where characters from one series collaborate with another. :)

Ah, I so love the original Zeldas. My dad is actually the core reason I even got into them. ... *cush-cush* *cush-cush*

Oh, have you ever played the emulated versions of the original Zeldas on your PC? That's a fun way to play the classics without having to buy them on the Wii Virtual Console / Own the special disc for the GCN. I actually have some of those ROMs if you'd ever be looking for them. :)

Another awesome installment! It is so fun being able to relate with the characters in your story! Also, I wasn't even bothered by the second page, its soo entertaining! Also, I hadn't seen the second drawing of Risu so that was neat as well. Keep it coming!

Yay! I really was afraid the run-on to page 2 would be a turn-off for some people. I did plan on some going that far, but I really didn't want it to happen. Though, as you may agree, Risu's story wouldn't have sounded quite right if I attempted to condense it.

Heehee, I love coming home to a new one of these! And I agree with the others, don't be afraid to add a second page if it's needed! ^.^

Oh, yay! *Big hugs* You have made my day, Zoom! It's so nice to know this method of story-telling is not only working out, but can still survive into a second page. Not that I'd push for more, or make it a regular thing, but I am so, so, *flutter jumps wildly* GABBY-GABBY-GABOO!