Don't get me wrong, I love lots of things about the USA, but I don't get why you have all those wooden houses, when I know for a fact that you have the story of the three little pigs over there! Bricks, people! You gotta build your house of bricks!
Guest starring:
MJ and his mommy belong to
MJBear
Lig belongs to
Lig
Yosh belongs to
Yosh-e-o
Dee belongs to
Darkpaw_Camui
Guest starring:
MJ and his mommy belong to
MJBearLig belongs to
LigYosh belongs to
Yosh-e-oDee belongs to
Darkpaw_Camui
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Well, for a quick story, I've got to give you kudos on doing a fine job as always. I actually "snuck" time in this evening so I could read it. :) Gaboo!
*blush* You have my character so nailed. I really would just go leaping off without caring about the whys or hows. My mind goes in so many directions that, once set into motion, it just can't stop. Poor Lig. :)
Another point I must remark on is how, like your other tales, you are able to take a classic, childhood aspect and run with it. I would've never thought to play on "The Three Little Pigs" and its impact on a young one who truly could, at an early age, realize the difference in what their home was made of. Too cute, Zoom, just too cute! *Hugs*
Lastly, despite even knowing Dee was in it, I was totally caught by surprise by the ending. The way you had him "spin" the cubs belief on the safety of wood and bricks was pure genius!
I do hope you manage to write out more tales in the future, Zoom. I've yet to ever find any in your collection that have been anything short of high-caliber. You inspire me to write every time I read your pieces. Keep up the great work!
*blush* You have my character so nailed. I really would just go leaping off without caring about the whys or hows. My mind goes in so many directions that, once set into motion, it just can't stop. Poor Lig. :)
Another point I must remark on is how, like your other tales, you are able to take a classic, childhood aspect and run with it. I would've never thought to play on "The Three Little Pigs" and its impact on a young one who truly could, at an early age, realize the difference in what their home was made of. Too cute, Zoom, just too cute! *Hugs*
Lastly, despite even knowing Dee was in it, I was totally caught by surprise by the ending. The way you had him "spin" the cubs belief on the safety of wood and bricks was pure genius!
I do hope you manage to write out more tales in the future, Zoom. I've yet to ever find any in your collection that have been anything short of high-caliber. You inspire me to write every time I read your pieces. Keep up the great work!
*blushes and hugs* Awww, you always say the nicest things! I'm glad you liked it! And I'm extra-glad you liked your characterisation - I picked the supporting cast before I'd worked out exactly what they were going to do, but when it occurred to me that Lig's fondness for complicated adventure games would clash nicely with Yosh's more simple approach, I had to include that little scene ^.^
It was an honor to be a part of such a delightful, little tale. Your depiction of me was quite flattering, as I'm always happy to see any artistic take on those aspects and concepts I present. *Big hugs* Gabby-Gabby-Gaboo!
Oh, *chuckle* thanks for sneaking a "kazootles" in for me, too! I so love that all-purpose, utility word. *blush*
Oh, *chuckle* thanks for sneaking a "kazootles" in for me, too! I so love that all-purpose, utility word. *blush*
Yay!! I reads a story!
...
*gasp!*
Is it a sign of the apocalypse?!?!
Very good story Zee ^^ Although the ending felt like it kinda expected to happen from earlier in the story. But the rest makes up for that!
Why not just follow Lig's advice and wear a diapee to keep that from happening? =3
Well, at least during playtime.
It always seems to happen during playtime
...
*gasp!*
Is it a sign of the apocalypse?!?!
Very good story Zee ^^ Although the ending felt like it kinda expected to happen from earlier in the story. But the rest makes up for that!
Why not just follow Lig's advice and wear a diapee to keep that from happening? =3
Well, at least during playtime.
It always seems to happen during playtime
This is just plain awesome zee!!! Thanks so much for putting me in your story and for writing a story for that fact. This was fun to read, well written and had a good storyline. Fun twist for how the good little wolf broke down the brick house, great part for Dee^^
Oh yeah, I hope you brought some extra pull ups from home too cause my momma wont hesitate to put you back in a diaper if you didn't XP
Oh yeah, I hope you brought some extra pull ups from home too cause my momma wont hesitate to put you back in a diaper if you didn't XP
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