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Page 55. Yay! Imani's back. I'll bet some of you forgot all about her. Luckily someone reminded me recently so I could have her come back. I was planning to do it, just not sure when.
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I found this page to be quite enjoyable, particularly with the splash of diversity and new looks at our familiar characters. More details forthwith! Let's begin...
Panel 1: Flawless perspective here, and I love Imani's pose and expression. Her 'cuteness' comes to bear here and it works. The only odd thing I thought of was how it looks like Imani's right hand appears to be missing. I think that the angle of her elbow is the trick here- keeping her right hand hidden is no issue, but a less severe angle might have removed this illusion.
Panel 2: A good embrace, convincingly pulled off. I don't think I have any complaints about this panel! All the characters look good, though I should probably ask where you got that brick texture from. It's pretty good!
Panel 3: Another good panel, with a clear focus on Imani. My only problem with the panel is that Imani's eyes look a little bigger than normal, maybe too big. That's about it on this one, not too much to say one way or another.
Panel 4: Good sense of depth and scale here- we get to see pretty clearly how 'stout' Chops is, but it's also a good display of facial expression, simple gesture, and posture. Good stuff.
Panel 5: I don't know why, but the silhouette in the club's door looks like one of those freaky Rabbids from the Rayman series! Libra is always such an excitable fellow, but it leads readers to look forward to his expressiveness, used nicely here.
Panel 6: Three characters in profile might not normally be considered exciting, but since I don't think you've ever used the perspective and because the characters' faces look so good it's effective here.
Panel 7: Gravy! Lovin' the band parody as well as your species choices. The panel is also a good distraction from the usual faces and a peek at the 'world' of the comic, allowing for a bit more overall atmosphere in a subtle way. Good stuff!
Panel 1: Flawless perspective here, and I love Imani's pose and expression. Her 'cuteness' comes to bear here and it works. The only odd thing I thought of was how it looks like Imani's right hand appears to be missing. I think that the angle of her elbow is the trick here- keeping her right hand hidden is no issue, but a less severe angle might have removed this illusion.
Panel 2: A good embrace, convincingly pulled off. I don't think I have any complaints about this panel! All the characters look good, though I should probably ask where you got that brick texture from. It's pretty good!
Panel 3: Another good panel, with a clear focus on Imani. My only problem with the panel is that Imani's eyes look a little bigger than normal, maybe too big. That's about it on this one, not too much to say one way or another.
Panel 4: Good sense of depth and scale here- we get to see pretty clearly how 'stout' Chops is, but it's also a good display of facial expression, simple gesture, and posture. Good stuff.
Panel 5: I don't know why, but the silhouette in the club's door looks like one of those freaky Rabbids from the Rayman series! Libra is always such an excitable fellow, but it leads readers to look forward to his expressiveness, used nicely here.
Panel 6: Three characters in profile might not normally be considered exciting, but since I don't think you've ever used the perspective and because the characters' faces look so good it's effective here.
Panel 7: Gravy! Lovin' the band parody as well as your species choices. The panel is also a good distraction from the usual faces and a peek at the 'world' of the comic, allowing for a bit more overall atmosphere in a subtle way. Good stuff!
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