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Well this is alittle pic i did just to see how well i can draw boobs XD so what do you think
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Pretty good!
I just think that her breasts need to be pronounced a bit more. I don't mean that she needs to have bigger boobs. What I'm saying is that her breasts need to have consistent curves that are obvious and stand out from her chest. The inner curves (cleavage) is misleading because they don't match up with the bottom curves of her breasts. This can cause confusion because the "cleavage" suggests that she's flat-chested in the way it's drawn, but the outer curve of her right breast contradicts that because it sticks out in comparison to her right torso line.
Not sure if that made any sense at all... But otherwise, I like this pic! Keep up the good work.
I just think that her breasts need to be pronounced a bit more. I don't mean that she needs to have bigger boobs. What I'm saying is that her breasts need to have consistent curves that are obvious and stand out from her chest. The inner curves (cleavage) is misleading because they don't match up with the bottom curves of her breasts. This can cause confusion because the "cleavage" suggests that she's flat-chested in the way it's drawn, but the outer curve of her right breast contradicts that because it sticks out in comparison to her right torso line.
Not sure if that made any sense at all... But otherwise, I like this pic! Keep up the good work.
Thank you! o.o even if the explanation is kind of confuseing but i see what your comeing from somewhat x.x i must keep on practiceing XD and I draw free handed so thats another reason why it kind of looks like that buuuuut comments like these kind of make me want to draw more thank you bunches *wiggles purring*
No problem. I realize that what I said is confusing. I read the whole thing over myself and I sort of got confused from it as well. xD
It's the reason why I said it might not make sense at all.
I didn't want to just leave it at that so I thought it would be better if I try to illustrate what I'm trying to say. I took your image and made some color lines over it to clarify what I mean. You can find it in my scraps here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2261529/
I hope you don't mind me doing this, and if you prefer that I take it down I will do so immediately.
The solid blue line outlines her right breast and the red color outlines her left breast. The green line represents the center line of her body. The sky-blue lines represent her arms and torso lines. As you can see, I think her left breast would be overlapping part of her right breast and left arm (represented by the red shading). I also feel that her left shoulder should be placed just a bit higher in that position. I hope this helps. I'm not really good at explaining myself. I apologize.
It's the reason why I said it might not make sense at all.
I didn't want to just leave it at that so I thought it would be better if I try to illustrate what I'm trying to say. I took your image and made some color lines over it to clarify what I mean. You can find it in my scraps here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2261529/
I hope you don't mind me doing this, and if you prefer that I take it down I will do so immediately.
The solid blue line outlines her right breast and the red color outlines her left breast. The green line represents the center line of her body. The sky-blue lines represent her arms and torso lines. As you can see, I think her left breast would be overlapping part of her right breast and left arm (represented by the red shading). I also feel that her left shoulder should be placed just a bit higher in that position. I hope this helps. I'm not really good at explaining myself. I apologize.
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